No Room, Go In
rollings
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four corners are leaving as much
as dire nights or post-dawn would
time, being round as the clock it is, offers ornament, not containment
four corners are eight
the power of nine
no control over the human day
is turning pages
in between green to gray
the tunnel is deep to dark is void
(is the soaring we too?)
horizons are sitting along the edge
protecting its own sky from falling
if only from this vision
should the other side be so lucky
as dire nights or post-dawn would
time, being round as the clock it is, offers ornament, not containment
four corners are eight
the power of nine
no control over the human day
is turning pages
in between green to gray
the tunnel is deep to dark is void
(is the soaring we too?)
horizons are sitting along the edge
protecting its own sky from falling
if only from this vision
should the other side be so lucky
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"Thanks for your poem it sounds like the words of heaven. Your visions and words make harmony".
This is a message for you from my young son. We were reading "No room, Go in" out load a few times and really enjoying it. When he told me what he wanted to say, I looked at him and said " well kid I'm not really sure what you mean but if anyone will know, it'll be rollins".
"if only from this vision should the other side be so lucky".
Smooth bro...let me use that one on my wife.
This is hands down the best compliment I've ever received on a poem.
Tell your young son thank you so much, and tell him of course I knew exactly what he meant !
P.S. I'm not a bro, bro
And a bump for a great work.
That line I liked so much swirls in my mind and gives light on images deep within to my heart. I don't think to say it anymore. I think to feel it...Madam. :oops:
In Joyous part.
Talon