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Twinkle drop

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited October 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She sometimes spent spare minutes wondering about questions of fate or choice and then some idea would suddenly appear like the sparkle of a beautiful water drop hanging on the lanai. It was so often like that! She'd be pounding her head on some brick wall, getting a scarred forehead, and then some kind of WOW moment would end it. Stunning her to attend it more than the effort had.

Sometimes she woke up to the truth that she couldn't stop loving him because loving him kept her in that open state she liked. Besides, he knew about some things she wanted to learn! He knew how to free and expertly spin the energy around himself and she wanted to practice that skill too. She wanted to be an adept farmer of ideas like him. Would anyone ever want to go back to a dark cell after being outside in the open air?! Would anyone who had found a great teacher suddenly choose to be left in ignorance again?! No, no, no. It felt very unlikely to her!!!
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  • vogonpoetbythelakevogonpoetbythelake Posts: 2,146
    Stunning her to attend it more than the effort had.

    YES!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    vogonpoetbythelake wrote:
    Stunning her to attend it more than the effort had.

    YES!

    :)
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  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    justam wrote:
    Stunning her to attend it more than the effort had.

    That really is an outstanding line.

    the whole writing is good
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Very good. As usual.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    the wolf wrote:
    Very good. As usual.

    Thanks! :)
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