Every Breath

DinghyDog

every breath is a struggle
a smile is a weight
loneliness joins us at every meeting

tiredness cannot bring sleep
nor boredom desire
nothing left to do
but live

living death is a struggle
all that's left is to wait
nothingness consumes me, I am eaten

bring me rest, bring me sleep
or bring desire
nothing left to do
but live

every breath is a struggle

donnaruhl

DinghyDog wrote:

every breath is a struggle
a smile is a weight
loneliness joins us at every meeting

tiredness cannot bring sleep
nor boredom desire
nothing left to do
but live

living death is a struggle
all that's left is to wait
nothingness consumes me, I am eaten

bring me rest, bring me sleep
or bring desire
nothing left to do
but live
every breath is a struggle

Wow! Very Deep

Godfather.

donnaruhl wrote:

DinghyDog wrote:

every breath is a struggle
a smile is a weight
loneliness joins us at every meeting

tiredness cannot bring sleep
nor boredom desire
nothing left to do
but live

living death is a struggle
all that's left is to wait
nothingness consumes me, I am eaten

bring me rest, bring me sleep
or bring desire
nothing left to do
but live
every breath is a struggle

Wow! Very Deep

this one straight up floored me, I like it !

Godfather.

DinghyDog

Thanks.