Worst rhyme in a Pearl Jam songs?

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  • slightofjeffslightofjeff Posts: 7,762
    SVRDhand13 wrote:

    For someone supposedly worth 80 million? :lol:

    That line doesn't have anything to do with the *price* of gasoline. Some of you are reading it much too literally.

    "Gone" is a "getting the fuck out of a bad situation" song, right? What he's saying there is that the gas in his tank -- ie, the literal MEANS for getting the fuck out of the bad situation -- is like currency to him. It means more to him than money or material possessions or anything else he's leaving behind.

    He's saying, "You can take every cent I have, everything I own. All I need is this tank of gas and I can start anew."

    The line that comes directly after "money in the bank" is important, too. "Gonna blow it all this time." -- basically he's going to take that tank of gas and spend it like money to the last drop. He's going to drive that vehicle as far as that last tank will take him.

    And that's how he'll find his freedom.

    Good idea. Good line.
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  • slightofjeffslightofjeff Posts: 7,762
    n8dawg79 wrote:
    Not a rhyme but... "Now Johnny he be having lots of women."

    That line makes me cringe EVERYTIME.

    Not a fan of Johnny Guitar the song, but it's *supposed* to be written with a kind of a "Blaxploitation" type of dialogue. Look at the guy on the cover of Johnny Guitar Watson album, for crying out loud. He's basically Shaft on a tricycle.
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  • Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost
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  • slightofjeffslightofjeff Posts: 7,762
    Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost

    I like that one, too. I think this maybe isn't the thread for me. ;)
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  • jburneykojburneyko Posts: 119
    a buddy of mine has always been extremely irked by the MFC line "ask I'm an ear"
  • Spiritual_ChaosSpiritual_Chaos Posts: 30,519
    Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost
    Yeah. This one is really bad in an otherwise great song. When I was younger I even had my own line I replaced it with when I sang along... can't remember it now though.
    jburneyko wrote:
    a buddy of mine has always been extremely irked by the MFC line "ask I'm an ear"
    Never really read up on MFC lyrics, but when I did this line really stood out. Could have been much stronger with another line!
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  • fortyshadesfortyshades Posts: 1,834
    Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost

    I like that one, too. I think this maybe isn't the thread for me. ;)

    In your opinion of course...

    Agree with you on "Gone" (even though it is not my favourite song). But I was wondering what your analysis is on this line. I could never figure out if the line (of Ghost) was related to a commercial or something. Since you gave a good explanation about Gone I am curious about your analysis here.
  • VitalogensiaVitalogensia Posts: 1,995
    Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost

    I like this line, as he's talking about the TV selling him what he doesn't need. I always envisioned some cheesy late night infomercial, "and this faaaaabulous soap cuts down on grime and makes you taller!"
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  • fortyshadesfortyshades Posts: 1,834
    SK359828 wrote:
    Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost

    I like this line, as he's talking about the TV selling him what he doesn't need. I always envisioned some cheesy late night infomercial, "and this faaaaabulous soap cuts down on grime and makes you taller!"

    So it is not reffering to a specific commercial? I always felt there was a direct reference there, but since I didn't live in the States during that time, I just didn't know.

    But yeah, def. an infomercial or something...
  • SK359828 wrote:
    Not a rhyme but a terrible line (hehe)
    "I never knew soap made you taller." - Ghost

    I like this line, as he's talking about the TV selling him what he doesn't need. I always envisioned some cheesy late night infomercial, "and this faaaaabulous soap cuts down on grime and makes you taller!"

    So it is not reffering to a specific commercial? I always felt there was a direct reference there, but since I didn't live in the States during that time, I just didn't know.

    But yeah, def. an infomercial or something...
    Simply improving the quality of water and using soap could make children grow taller, according to the first study of its kind.
    Researchers found that basic methods to maintain good hygiene could add half a centimetre to a five-year-old as poor personal care can increase the risk of infection in the gut, thereby reducing the amount of nutrients absorbed.
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  • fortyshadesfortyshades Posts: 1,834
    SK359828 wrote:

    I like this line, as he's talking about the TV selling him what he doesn't need. I always envisioned some cheesy late night infomercial, "and this faaaaabulous soap cuts down on grime and makes you taller!"

    So it is not reffering to a specific commercial? I always felt there was a direct reference there, but since I didn't live in the States during that time, I just didn't know.

    But yeah, def. an infomercial or something...
    Simply improving the quality of water and using soap could make children grow taller, according to the first study of its kind.
    Researchers found that basic methods to maintain good hygiene could add half a centimetre to a five-year-old as poor personal care can increase the risk of infection in the gut, thereby reducing the amount of nutrients absorbed.

    Interesting... What is the source?
  • SVRDhand13SVRDhand13 Posts: 26,168
    Not a rhyme but so incredibly cringe worthy...

    "This is how I feel"- Smile

    So unnecessary
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  • "No matter how cold the winter, there's a springtime ahead"

    How cliche? C'mon Ed... I could have come up with that, and I don't have a single poetic bone in my body.

    Flame away... I know people love that song, but I can't stand it.
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  • slightofjeffslightofjeff Posts: 7,762
    "No matter how cold the winter, there's a springtime ahead"

    How cliche? C'mon Ed... I could have come up with that, and I don't have a single poetic bone in my body.

    Flame away... I know people love that song, but I can't stand it.

    Dammit. I really, really, really need to stop clicking on this thread. It's a complusion! (I love this song, btw)
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  • GratefulJamGratefulJam Posts: 1,803
    Well said.
    SVRDhand13 wrote:

    For someone supposedly worth 80 million? :lol:

    That line doesn't have anything to do with the *price* of gasoline. Some of you are reading it much too literally.

    "Gone" is a "getting the fuck out of a bad situation" song, right? What he's saying there is that the gas in his tank -- ie, the literal MEANS for getting the fuck out of the bad situation -- is like currency to him. It means more to him than money or material possessions or anything else he's leaving behind.

    He's saying, "You can take every cent I have, everything I own. All I need is this tank of gas and I can start anew."

    The line that comes directly after "money in the bank" is important, too. "Gonna blow it all this time." -- basically he's going to take that tank of gas and spend it like money to the last drop. He's going to drive that vehicle as far as that last tank will take him.

    And that's how he'll find his freedom.

    Good idea. Good line.
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  • fortyshadesfortyshades Posts: 1,834
    SVRDhand13 wrote:
    Not a rhyme but so incredibly cringe worthy...

    "This is how I feel"- Smile

    So unnecessary

    I like this line to be honest, especially, they way it brings the song down - but that is just how I feel.


    "No matter how cold the winter, there's a springtime ahead"

    How cliche? C'mon Ed... I could have come up with that, and I don't have a single poetic bone in my body.

    Flame away... I know people love that song, but I can't stand it.

    This is an excellent line! Especially the way the meaning is reversed when he sings it the second time...
  • tcadd94tcadd94 Posts: 611
    TMudrick wrote:
    "What used to be a house of cards,
    has turned into a resevoioioiowwoor"

    Cringe as I write it....

    Haha, I do love that song though.
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    Like every sparrow falling, like every grain of sand.
  • tcadd94tcadd94 Posts: 611
    SVRDhand13 wrote:
    Not a rhyme but so incredibly cringe worthy...

    "This is how I feel"- Smile

    So unnecessary

    I like this line to be honest, especially, they way it brings the song down - but that is just how I feel.


    "No matter how cold the winter, there's a springtime ahead"

    How cliche? C'mon Ed... I could have come up with that, and I don't have a single poetic bone in my body.

    Flame away... I know people love that song, but I can't stand it.

    This is an excellent line! Especially the way the meaning is reversed when he sings it the second time...

    Do not like "This is how I feel." But I do love Thumbing My Way. Got me through a couple of tough times. I do agree it's cliche but it's exactly what I needed to hear.
    I've been fortunate enough to see Pearl Jam live.

    I am hanging in the balance of a perfect finished plan
    Like every sparrow falling, like every grain of sand.
  • fortyshadesfortyshades Posts: 1,834
    tcadd94 wrote:
    SVRDhand13 wrote:
    Not a rhyme but so incredibly cringe worthy...

    "This is how I feel"- Smile

    So unnecessary

    I like this line to be honest, especially, they way it brings the song down - but that is just how I feel.


    "No matter how cold the winter, there's a springtime ahead"

    How cliche? C'mon Ed... I could have come up with that, and I don't have a single poetic bone in my body.

    Flame away... I know people love that song, but I can't stand it.

    This is an excellent line! Especially the way the meaning is reversed when he sings it the second time...

    Do not like "This is how I feel." But I do love Thumbing My Way. Got me through a couple of tough times. I do agree it's cliche but it's exactly what I needed to hear.

    Some cliche's are true ;)
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  • tcadd94tcadd94 Posts: 611
    SK359828 wrote:
    "The wisdom that the old can't give away
    Hey,..."

    Love the song, don't cringe when I hear this, but I sometimes get the feeling he didn't know what to say next.

    Haha, my thought exactly. I love that line "the wisdom that the old can't give away, hey, constant recoil, sometimes life just don't leave you alone". So true. But I feel like Ed didn't know what to say next too.
    I've been fortunate enough to see Pearl Jam live.

    I am hanging in the balance of a perfect finished plan
    Like every sparrow falling, like every grain of sand.
  • Doesn't rhyme, but I'm not a fan of "Feel the sky blanket you/With gems and rhinestones"
    Not worse than (also not rhyming): "Off the track, in the mud. That's the moss in the aforementioned verse". What the fuck is that, haha.


    that one makes me cringe when i hear it. You're listening and it's like, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, what is this clunky shit? Really babies, really?
  • Not a rhyme but kinda redundant and it bothers me:

    "Let me catch my BREATH to BREATHE..."
  • Hear the circus so profound
    I hear the sirens more and more in this here town.

    I love the song, I just don't like this.
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