Are You The Man?

donnaruhl
donnaruhl Posts: 2,157
I want a man,
Who can write me a love song.
Sing it under the midnight,
Put me over the stars.

I want a man,
Who can whisper sweet nothings.
Who will stroke my hair gently,
As I lay in his arms.

I want a man,
Who compliments my cooking,
Even after it's been in,
The oven too long.

I want a man,
Who loves me completely,
Who won't hold it against me.
When I'm out of my mind.

Are you the man,
I've been dreaming of lately,
Meet me under the midnight,
And I'll sing you this song.
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Comments

  • Annafalk
    Annafalk Sweden Posts: 4,004
    Enjoyed your poem, I hope you will find your dream guy :)
  • OktoberRayne
    OktoberRayne Nevada Posts: 16
    Very good poem I liked it! :)
    "I'll ride the wave where it takes me...I'll hold the pain, release me"
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  • donnaruhl
    donnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    Thank you for your sweet comments.
    I just threw some words together for a song.
    I'm still trying to come up with a chorus.
    I have the melody in my head,
    But that's as far as I've gotten.