Keeping Quiet

rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
edited September 2013 in A Moving Train
Now we will count to twelve and we will all keep still

for once on the face of the earth, let's not speak in any language;

let's stop for a second, and not move our arms too much.

It would be an exotic moment without rush, without engines;

we would all be together in a sudden strangeness.

Fisherman in the cold sea would not harm the whales

and the man gathering salt would not hurt his hands.

Those who prepare green wars, wars with gas, wars with fire,

victories with no survivors, would put on clean clothes

and walk about with their brothers in the shade, doing nothing.

What I want should not be confused with total inactivity.

Life is what it is about...

If we were not so single-minded about keeping our lives moving,

and for once could do nothing, perhaps a huge silence

might interrupt this sadness of never understanding ourselves

and of threatening ourselves with death.

Perhaps the earth can teach us as when everything seems to be dead in winter and later proves to be alive. Now I'll count to twelve and you keep quiet and I will go.

-- Pablo Neruda
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Pablo Neruda

    someone once told me that my poems are like that of the late pablo neruda. truly i was set on fire that day
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Rollings ...you are my hero today, thanks'

    Godfather.
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chadwick wrote:
    Pablo Neruda

    someone once told me that my poems are like that of the late pablo neruda. truly i was set on fire that day

    "this kinda thread reminds me of those people who set fire to their own genitals for attention" ~ dunkman
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Godfather. wrote:
    Rollings ...you are my hero today, thanks'

    Godfather.

    you're welcome, sir ;)
  • hedonisthedonist Posts: 24,524
    Keeping still, keeping quiet - just being, thinking, observing. It's healthy and necessary.

    I don't know much of Neruda's work, but have loved everything of his that I've read to date.

    Rich but simple words, and ideas...good stuff.

    Thanks for this one :)
  • brianluxbrianlux Posts: 42,053
    Great, wonderful, awesome... no, can't find the right words for the good feeling this poem gives off. Loving it.
    “The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man [or woman] who lives fully is prepared to die at any time.”
    Variously credited to Mark Twain or Edward Abbey.













  • callencallen Posts: 6,388
    rollings wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    Pablo Neruda

    someone once told me that my poems are like that of the late pablo neruda. truly i was set on fire that day

    "this kinda thread reminds me of those people who set fire to their own genitals for attention" ~ dunkman
    Whatever happened to dunkman?....the gent had a way with words.
    10-18-2000 Houston, 04-06-2003 Houston, 6-25-2003 Toronto, 10-8-2004 Kissimmee, 9-4-2005 Calgary, 12-3-05 Sao Paulo, 7-2-2006 Denver, 7-22-06 Gorge, 7-23-2006 Gorge, 9-13-2006 Bern, 6-22-2008 DC, 6-24-2008 MSG, 6-25-2008 MSG
  • callencallen Posts: 6,388
    Godfather. wrote:
    Rollings ...you are my hero today, thanks'

    Godfather.
    :)

    Wonderful...will count to 12 or maybe even 30.
    10-18-2000 Houston, 04-06-2003 Houston, 6-25-2003 Toronto, 10-8-2004 Kissimmee, 9-4-2005 Calgary, 12-3-05 Sao Paulo, 7-2-2006 Denver, 7-22-06 Gorge, 7-23-2006 Gorge, 9-13-2006 Bern, 6-22-2008 DC, 6-24-2008 MSG, 6-25-2008 MSG
  • hedonisthedonist Posts: 24,524
    callen wrote:
    rollings wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    Pablo Neruda

    someone once told me that my poems are like that of the late pablo neruda. truly i was set on fire that day

    "this kinda thread reminds me of those people who set fire to their own genitals for attention" ~ dunkman
    Whatever happened to dunkman?....the gent had a way with words.
    I always liked that Scot - good fella.
  • brianluxbrianlux Posts: 42,053
    Major thread revival. Good show, Hedonist. :)
    “The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man [or woman] who lives fully is prepared to die at any time.”
    Variously credited to Mark Twain or Edward Abbey.













  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    wars with gas
  • hedonisthedonist Posts: 24,524
    brianlux wrote:
    Major thread revival. Good show, Hedonist. :)
    Too bizarre; I swear I wrote that three months ago.

    Kat?!
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