Replacement

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited May 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
tonight I wrote some long/clear/rhythmic thing
it's pretty good!
it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
I replaced it with this
the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
how could I say something that might hurt?
even inadvertently?!
how could I be so ungenerous?!!
who the heck am I to withhold love?
it just felt wrong
so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
it took no time at all
but it has love instead of reasons
and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!
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  • donnaruhl
    donnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    justam wrote:
    tonight I wrote some long/clear/rhythmic thing
    it's pretty good!
    it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
    I replaced it with this
    the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
    how could I say something that might hurt?
    even inadvertently?!
    how could I be so ungenerous?!!
    who the heck am I to withhold love?
    it just felt wrong
    so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
    it took no time at all
    but it has love instead of reasons
    and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!


    At least you saved what you wrote.Unlike Me. :(
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    donnaruhl wrote:


    At least you saved what you wrote.Unlike Me. :(

    I generally save things that I've worked on. I have hundreds and hundreds of pieces though so I'll probably never read it again! :P
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