Replacement

justam

tonight I wrote some long/clear/rhythmic thing
it's pretty good!
it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
I replaced it with this
the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
how could I say something that might hurt?
even inadvertently?!
how could I be so ungenerous?!!
who the heck am I to withhold love?
it just felt wrong
so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
it took no time at all
but it has love instead of reasons
and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!

donnaruhl

justam wrote:

tonight I wrote some long/clear/rhythmic thing
it's pretty good!
it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
I replaced it with this
the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
how could I say something that might hurt?
even inadvertently?!
how could I be so ungenerous?!!
who the heck am I to withhold love?
it just felt wrong
so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
it took no time at all
but it has love instead of reasons
and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!

At least you saved what you wrote.Unlike Me.

justam

donnaruhl wrote:

At least you saved what you wrote.Unlike Me.

I generally save things that I've worked on. I have hundreds and hundreds of pieces though so I'll probably never read it again! :P