Replacement

justam
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tonight I wrote some long/clear/rhythmic thing
it's pretty good!
it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
I replaced it with this
the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
how could I say something that might hurt?
even inadvertently?!
how could I be so ungenerous?!!
who the heck am I to withhold love?
it just felt wrong
so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
it took no time at all
but it has love instead of reasons
and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!
it's pretty good!
it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
I replaced it with this
the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
how could I say something that might hurt?
even inadvertently?!
how could I be so ungenerous?!!
who the heck am I to withhold love?
it just felt wrong
so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
it took no time at all
but it has love instead of reasons
and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!
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justam wrote:tonight I wrote some long/clear/rhythmic thing
it's pretty good!
it took some time, but I just saved it on my desktop
I replaced it with this
the other piece left me feeling wrong for making sounds
how could I say something that might hurt?
even inadvertently?!
how could I be so ungenerous?!!
who the heck am I to withhold love?
it just felt wrong
so here's some unclear/short/clumsy thang
it took no time at all
but it has love instead of reasons
and I have no explanation as to why it's even here!
At least you saved what you wrote.Unlike Me. :(0
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