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Psychotic Waltz

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited April 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I’ve been thinking as the world spins around
If you looked into my mind
What would you find
Could you understand the questions in my life.

If I offered you a glimpse of the madness behind my eyes
Would you listen to the music of a mad man’s life
Will you dance to the psychotic waltz ringing in my ears.

And the world keeps spinning around and around
Like a runaway train without a sound
On tracks that led to nowhere with nowhere left hide.

Will the world remember the music of a madman’s life
Will they dance to the psychotic waltz that is ringing in my ears.

Or will you simply walk away.

I’ll offer you a glimpse
A chance to look inside at the questions in my life
I’ll buy you a ticket on a runaway train
If you listen to the music behind my eyes
Then you will know that we are not insane.

Or will you simply walk away.


Godfather.
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    honestly i think this is the best thing you've written
    awesome
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • supersonicyearssupersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    That could be the lyrics to an amazing song.
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Yeah, you could even write a song that just illustrates the psychotic waltz by having harmony and a sea-sick kind of tilt to the waltz pattern that SUGGESTS the mood! :D
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mysticweed wrote:
    honestly i think this is the best thing you've written
    awesome
    thank you G ! ;)

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Justam and supersonicyears any of you have a band ? I would love to hear our song, that's every poets or wanna be poets dream :lol:

    Godfather.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Godfather. wrote:
    Justam and supersonicyears any of you have a band ? I would love to hear our song, that's every poets or wanna be poets dream :lol:

    Godfather.

    Godfather, I've always been too shy to write my own songs. I mean, then people would actually hear what I think about. It's been like pulling teeth to get me used to writing words about what I think about. :oops:

    I play a lot of music though and arrange things so, theoretically, I could write songs.

    It's probably the next hill I'll need to climb. :?
    :)
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    justam wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    Justam and supersonicyears any of you have a band ? I would love to hear our song, that's every poets or wanna be poets dream :lol:

    Godfather.

    Godfather, I've always been too shy to write my own songs. I mean, then people would actually hear what I think about. It's been like pulling teeth to get me used to writing words about what I think about. :oops:

    I play a lot of music though and arrange things so, theoretically, I could write songs.

    It's probably the next hill I'll need to climb. :?
    :)

    I believe you will be very good at it I hope to hear some of your work one day.

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    thank you godfather. thank you for being out of your mind like the rest of us.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    I love this GF and so very true. Thank you this was beautifully written...
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    thank you godfather. thank you for being out of your mind like the rest of us.

    yes we are indeed a distinguished club
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    mysticweed wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    thank you godfather. thank you for being out of your mind like the rest of us.

    yes we are indeed a distinguished club
    :wave:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    chadwick wrote:
    mysticweed wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    thank you godfather. thank you for being out of your mind like the rest of us.

    yes we are indeed a distinguished club
    :wave:


    :lol: to quote an old "Slayed"song "mama we're all crazy now !" :lol:

    Godfather.
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