on time

Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
edited March 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
if thumbtacks could pinpoint
we could start a fire
sparked by stones
too many inches measured
have proven us birds
wingless, we have not flown
through the nebulas which bruise
the lenses of our telescopes
and the supernovas
stirred into our coffee mugs
as we awake from dreams
black and blue saturday morning cartoons
and listen to the quiet
elliott smith fashioned
out of sound
while the sky repeats
itself on long stretches of highway
days spent waiting for more
beautiful days
filled with gray static
says my radio
and into the evenings
where we pass
the ten-mile diamond necklace
of oncoming traffic
and wish we were back home

but me? i wake up talking
and don't know why i feel
like a freight train made of glass
heading for that wall of bricks
they painted a tunnel on
in said dreams
and though you measured my speeds
in pyramids-per-desert
i was simply waiting around
for the violets i'd planted
for you
to grow before i realized
i'd thrown my seeds into quicksand
and that the hands on my watch
were strangling the same two numbers
while the ticking sounds
were simply coming from my chest
but they say
a watched wrist
never boils, or shouldn't be looked
in the mouth
or can't throw stones or
won't jump when lead
to the water
or whatever it is they say
about broken watches,
but honestly, how often
does it rain in a desert anyway?
I knew it all along, see?
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like the way you write Chip.
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    if thumbtacks could pinpoint
    we could start a fire
    sparked by stones
    too many inches measured
    have proven us birds
    wingless, we have not flown
    through the nebulas which bruise
    the lenses of our telescopes
    and the supernovas
    stirred into our coffee mugs
    as we awake from dreams
    black and blue saturday morning cartoons
    and listen to the quiet
    elliott smith fashioned
    out of sound
    while the sky repeats
    itself on long stretches of highway
    days spent waiting for more
    beautiful days
    filled with gray static
    says my radio
    and into the evenings
    where we pass
    the ten-mile diamond necklace
    of oncoming traffic
    and wish we were back home

    but me? i wake up talking
    and don't know why i feel
    like a freight train made of glass
    heading for that wall of bricks
    they painted a tunnel on
    in said dreams
    and though you measured my speeds
    in pyramids-per-desert
    i was simply waiting around
    for the violets i'd planted
    for you
    to grow before i realized
    i'd thrown my seeds into quicksand
    and that the hands on my watch
    were strangling the same two numbers
    while the ticking sounds
    were simply coming from my chest
    but they say
    a watched wrist
    never boils, or shouldn't be looked
    in the mouth
    or can't throw stones or
    won't jump when lead
    to the water
    or whatever it is they say
    about broken watches,
    but honestly, how often
    does it rain in a desert anyway?

    "on time"

    you're something else Chip McFlennigan
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