impulsive writing

Nevermind90

I was layin on the bed watching Bon Iver - Coachella.. hit me hard when I heard the first chords of Beth/Rest...

Sat up to open a document to impulsive write some while still istening to the live version of Beth/Rest at Coachella...

Wrote it in about 3minutes... felt like sharing it...

Dead & paid

walking down a green lakegarden
shiver back down the garden, the drum hit me hard
a tear for that, Id pay a tear for, too far
the piano shoot me dead, heart shiver seering for myself

shivers again, I cant explain... what she offered
she mention something about love
turned out to be a lover, its not a deep cut for me
while the trumpet still plays a tune
tune for tune, sing along to the tune he plays

Bon Iver live @ Coachella turns over to The Wolves (act 1 & 2) while I write some last words..

Your act toward me, still seering, still smiling
why do I smile? Hear me up, I said I had a story to say
Can I play with this madness? Toward another level..

I cant even fly tonight, a lover is gone and a lakegarden is found.
I can shiver back down the rivergarden, Id say shiver for yourself tonight
I cant even play the piano anymore, I forgot the tune, tune for tune
I do smile in my future, now I cry on tunes he plays..

Nevermind90

(can you feel) the laughter?

Can you?
If I could ... I

I sure would ... do

would you?
words has many meanings

can you feel?
If I could ... I

there is a feeling ... I

I can feel no laughter

like autumn coming to close
I feel my calm life
can you?
If you could you

sure would

you been down?
can you?
travel if I could?
go to the 60s

I sure Would
feel
the laughter

chadwick

it's a fun way of writing. a must
thank you for sharing

Nevermind90

chadwick wrote:

it's a fun way of writing. a must
thank you for sharing

cheers fellow!