poems from water

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited February 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this will be my newest way of writing. writing whilst swimming. i have a notebook journal thingy biologists use out in the field during a rainy day. write in the rain. it is tested & proven. it was required for these environmental science classes i was taking.

it will be pool side from here on out. today i rolled some killer lines off the top of my head as i swam laps. to fucking bad i forgot them altogether. hi, i am a-hole man pleased to meat you.

part 1 starts soon.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    looking forward to it sir.

    my new way of writing is themes. I started a new notebook and came up with 5 themes i want to stick to
    while filling it's pages. Also characters. All songs and poems in said notebook will be written about, or from the point of view of these few characters that i've already written a backstory for.

    whatever helps getting the words out, i'm all for.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    the wolf wrote:
    looking forward to it sir.

    my new way of writing is themes. I started a new notebook and came up with 5 themes i want to stick to
    while filling it's pages. Also characters. All songs and poems in said notebook will be written about, or from the point of view of these few characters that i've already written a backstory for.

    whatever helps getting the words out, i'm all for.
    love your plans. and i just love getting a new notebook... i like seeing you back around here. look forward to reading your stuff, sir.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • STAYSEA
    STAYSEA Posts: 3,814
    I looked up the ISBN?

    Where can I read you?
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  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    Looking forward to your poems/ thoughts from water....
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    violence the hands of slapping
    strolling at rest a lazy quick day
    walk right up to them unsuspecting idiots
    jack one square in the fucking mouth
    drop the other in the knee or groin a boot to them
    opened ribs invite blow torches fueling my solid day

    and in this keyhole peephole the porthole of dreams invites bloodshed like honeycomb
    a must have for sweetness
    a line on good
    a line of bad
    the exact center run by neither but human
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    chadwick wrote:
    violence the hands of slapping
    strolling at rest a lazy quick day
    walk right up to them unsuspecting idiots
    jack one square in the fucking mouth
    drop the other in the knee or groin a boot to them
    opened ribs invite blow torches fueling my solid day

    and in this keyhole peephole the porthole of dreams invites bloodshed like honeycomb
    a must have for sweetness
    a line on good
    a line of bad
    the exact center run by neither but human


    I enjoyed reading your - angry poem... thanks for sharing.
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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    glad to see your new form of creating is paying off. my new notebook is half filled with my idea for a change of pace and style. bad part is, there is only two complete songs (one of which i could never hear myslef playing) and 3 complete poems. the other pages have 4 to 6 bits and pieces, a verse here, a chorus there, a thought everywhere.....

    not working out for me so much. maybe some of the best 4 lines at a time that i've ever written, but nothing to connect the dots.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel

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