poems from water

chadwick
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this will be my newest way of writing. writing whilst swimming. i have a notebook journal thingy biologists use out in the field during a rainy day. write in the rain. it is tested & proven. it was required for these environmental science classes i was taking.
it will be pool side from here on out. today i rolled some killer lines off the top of my head as i swam laps. to fucking bad i forgot them altogether. hi, i am a-hole man pleased to meat you.
part 1 starts soon.
it will be pool side from here on out. today i rolled some killer lines off the top of my head as i swam laps. to fucking bad i forgot them altogether. hi, i am a-hole man pleased to meat you.
part 1 starts soon.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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looking forward to it sir.
my new way of writing is themes. I started a new notebook and came up with 5 themes i want to stick to
while filling it's pages. Also characters. All songs and poems in said notebook will be written about, or from the point of view of these few characters that i've already written a backstory for.
whatever helps getting the words out, i'm all for.Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel0 -
the wolf wrote:looking forward to it sir.
my new way of writing is themes. I started a new notebook and came up with 5 themes i want to stick to
while filling it's pages. Also characters. All songs and poems in said notebook will be written about, or from the point of view of these few characters that i've already written a backstory for.
whatever helps getting the words out, i'm all for.for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0 -
I looked up the ISBN?
Where can I read you?0 -
Looking forward to your poems/ thoughts from water....*********************************************************************************************0
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violence the hands of slapping
strolling at rest a lazy quick day
walk right up to them unsuspecting idiots
jack one square in the fucking mouth
drop the other in the knee or groin a boot to them
opened ribs invite blow torches fueling my solid day
and in this keyhole peephole the porthole of dreams invites bloodshed like honeycomb
a must have for sweetness
a line on good
a line of bad
the exact center run by neither but humanfor poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0 -
chadwick wrote:violence the hands of slapping
strolling at rest a lazy quick day
walk right up to them unsuspecting idiots
jack one square in the fucking mouth
drop the other in the knee or groin a boot to them
opened ribs invite blow torches fueling my solid day
and in this keyhole peephole the porthole of dreams invites bloodshed like honeycomb
a must have for sweetness
a line on good
a line of bad
the exact center run by neither but human
I enjoyed reading your - angry poem... thanks for sharing.*********************************************************************************************0 -
glad to see your new form of creating is paying off. my new notebook is half filled with my idea for a change of pace and style. bad part is, there is only two complete songs (one of which i could never hear myslef playing) and 3 complete poems. the other pages have 4 to 6 bits and pieces, a verse here, a chorus there, a thought everywhere.....
not working out for me so much. maybe some of the best 4 lines at a time that i've ever written, but nothing to connect the dots.Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel0
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