HE!

vogonpoetbythelake
vogonpoetbythelake Posts: 2,146
edited January 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
HE!
So different
Body sculpted from Adonis
Eye of my beholden pulls me through to the present
What a gift sent to me
From the heights of my imagination yet unexplored,
Reality rocks me
Grounded in the blooming possibilities
Fair way, give way
Time too long spent away
In hours of longing
Funneling feelings into body
Parts assigned
Fearful Tremulous acts on the viscera,
Alerted to the altered state of spinning loves tapestry
Warming walls, threaded through to todays castle keep
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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    vogonpoetbythelake wrote:
    HE!
    So different
    Body sculpted from Adonis
    Eye of my beholden pulls me through to the present
    What a gift sent to me
    From the heights of my imagination yet unexplored,
    Reality rocks me
    Grounded in the blooming possibilities
    Fair way, give way
    Time too long spent away
    In hours of longing
    Funneling feelings into body
    Parts assigned
    Fearful Tremulous acts on the viscera,
    Alerted to the altered state of spinning loves tapestry
    Warming walls, threaded through to todays castle keep

    dannng. I do believe I've felt this, but wow the way you wrote it , . ,

    Eye of my beholden pulls me through to the present

    I love that pulled-through stuff
  • vogonpoetbythelake
    vogonpoetbythelake Posts: 2,146
    danng it is, thank you

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