And so

vogonpoetbythelakevogonpoetbythelake Posts: 2,146
edited January 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And so this flower has born witness to the busy bumble bee, a hum, ahem!
A tightly wound bud well past its prime for opening
Flourishes in the slow probe that announces the bloom
Unknown to the thorns that harbor this petal
Floating
Drifting at once a light
In flight, fleeing the admittance of a beauty so deep
Steeped in bubbling sentiment
Sentido
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    And so this flower has born witness to the busy bumble bee, a hum, ahem!
    A tightly wound bud well past its prime for opening
    Flourishes in the slow probe that announces the bloom
    Unknown to the thorns that harbor this petal
    Floating
    Drifting at once a light
    In flight, fleeing the admittance of a beauty so deep
    Steeped in bubbling sentiment
    Sentido

    I like this :thumbup:
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