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A Poem for Eddie

donnaruhldonnaruhl Posts: 2,157
edited December 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Re-Written:

You painted me a picture,
You told me a story.
You wrote me a song
I sing along.

Me and my kerchief,
You and your suitcase.
I took a walk with you,
Down Memory Road.

Sing me away for awhile,
Sing me back home.
Sing to me a song from your suitcase,
So that I may walk with you once again,
Down Memory Road.

I wrote this after watching music video's
and Interviews, Past and Present.
:D
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    the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    very cool!
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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    donnaruhldonnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    Here you go Talon Ted.
    Just for you. ;)
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    TalonTeddTalonTedd Toronto Posts: 835
    donnaruhl wrote:
    Here you go Talon Ted.
    Just for you. ;)
    donnaruhl wrote:
    Re-Written:

    You painted me a picture,
    You told me a story.
    You wrote me a song
    I sing along.

    Me and my kerchief,
    You and your suitcase.
    I took a walk with you,
    Down Memory Road.

    Sing me away for awhile,
    Sing me back home.
    Sing to me a song from your suitcase,
    So that I may walk with you once again,
    Down Memory Road.

    I wrote this after watching music video's
    and Interviews, Past and Present.
    :D

    I feel so privileged and I just love it.
    "sing for me awhile,
    sing me back home".
    something that happens every day.
    And all the memories the music conjures...
    glad, sad, good and bad. the images are endlessly welcome.

    I have a song dedication for you donnaruhl. Since we are in the season of miracles and dreams I want to dedicate the song "Low Light", if only for the title. You and Eye Candy close this holiday with the lights low...happy holidays. ;):D
    I remember when, yeah. I swore I knew everything, oh yeah.
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    donnaruhldonnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    Why,Thank You Mr. Talon Ted
    Tis the season for sure. I'm glad you liked it.
    And I will look up the lyrics and the music to Low Light.
    Thanks for the dedication dear. Merry Christmas.
    Donna.
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    TalonTeddTalonTedd Toronto Posts: 835
    All the lyrics ring true accept (and a big accept) the car crash part :nono: . I see you drive for a living and I won't be wishing any of that on you my dear. More like "two birds is what they'll see. Getting lost upon their way". ;)
    and a Merry Christmas to you too.
    Talon Tedd
    I remember when, yeah. I swore I knew everything, oh yeah.
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    donnaruhldonnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    TalonTedd wrote:
    All the lyrics ring true accept (and a big accept) the car crash part :nono: . I see you drive for a living and I won't be wishing any of that on you my dear. More like "two birds is what they'll see. Getting lost upon their way". ;)
    and a Merry Christmas to you too.
    Talon Tedd

    At least the two birds weren't with one stone :lol:

    They do take one another for life.If I'm ever to get
    lost in life,I hope it's lost in love.

    Oh,and I think I've already had my crash of a lifetime.
    I was less than 1block from work,when I was hit by two
    big rigs. Had I been in mine,I wouldn't have been injured. :(
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    whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    Absolutely lovely Donna!! Sorry it took me so long to finally come read it!! But very very lovely.
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