Wrote a song...

PH20

Don't know how to "properly" write a song, but here it is...

It's called...Breaking Down

Verse 1
Sweet days lived...soon forgotten
Felt so high...now I'm droppin
Searchin for what's me again...nothin's there again.

Verse 2
Laid to rest...all I've wanted.
Tell the rest...all they've wanted...
to hear for this one last time.

Chorus
And would you regress if I said...
I'm breakin down again...I'm tellin you my friend
Don't use it all against me...Cause you were right there with me
Soft spoken alibi...False face in full denial
Tell me again why we went wrong from the start.

Refrain
Good luck to you while I'm drowning in this bottle
Searching for the breaks with my hand on the throttle
But I've waited too long to try and change my ways
And the faking gets easier every day.

Verse 3
Might be the one...sinking under
Lend a hand...if you wonder
What this trip is all about...cursing what it's all about.

Repeat chorus twice...

Hope you like it.

bowerymission

i think you are quite good at song writing, actually