Misty Morning Hop

Jason78

I plucked you
flower.......weed
from your family
from your place
you slunk in my pocket
as I hiked down your hills
till' I got you home
tucked you in a beer bottle
full of water
you slunk, I slept
when I awoke
you'd risen
and rose with each hour
as the sun set
the sun slinks
wild weed!
oh, sun of my day!

justam

Somehow, I don't think most people would like the idea of being called a weed. :? :P

Jason78

It did end up sounding like it was about a girl but it really was about a wild weed. A really beautiful one. That's something to work with.