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he stopped loving me september the ninth

mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited September 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
as I stood at the shore
i heard his voice
barely a whisper under the crash of the waves

take me with you i cried
please
just take me with you

with that breath
his ashes were out to sea
and he was
long
long
gone


my deepest heart-felt gratitude to all who reached out to me these past two years
your words of comfort and kindness have meant more to me than you all will ever know
fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mysticweed wrote:
    as I stood at the shore
    i heard his voice
    barely a whisper under the crash of the waves

    take me with you i cried
    please
    just take me with you

    with that breath
    his ashes were out to sea
    and he was
    long
    long
    gone


    my deepest heart-felt gratitude to all who reached out to me these past two years
    your words of comfort and kindness have meant more to me than you all will ever know

    love hugs and positive thoughts to you my friend.

    Jeff.
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    heartbeat.gif Gayle
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    If you believe that everyone has a spirit of energy besides a body then even once the body is gone, the person still loves you where ever that energy is.

    Hugs for you. {{{{mysticweed}}}}
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    http://youtu.be/1R2F9f2Cl6Y
    all i can hear is george singing to you

    hugs your way
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    http://youtu.be/1R2F9f2Cl6Y
    all i can hear is george singing to you

    hugs your way

    thank you dear wickweed

    and thanks, again, everyone for the support

    the verse is part of a "long long gone" mini-mini-series

    and the title is indeed an homage to mr jones

    luh-huv that song
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    been listening to this song a lot lately. i do believe this song may help you feel a bit better today. hugs your way, mysticweed

    http://youtu.be/c6J6EMTo8Wk

    Now I'm back on the street again
    It never rains unless it pours
    Try to get back on my feet again
    I hear the raging thunder as it roars

    Chorus:
    Tonight tonight is it just a rhapsody
    Or am I right
    Tonight tonight is it all a mystery
    I just can't fight no more

    I hear the questions surface in my mind
    Of my mistakes that I have made
    Times and places I have left behind
    And am I ever going to make the grade

    Chorus

    As I beat my head against the wall
    Running round in circles in vain
    I'm feeling three feet tall
    You don't understand I'm fading away

    Don't want your pity or your sympathy
    It isn't gonna prove a thing to me
    Good intentions pave the way to hell
    Don't you worry when you hear me sing
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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