listening between the lines

pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
edited September 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the young woman tells me her story
sad and moving

is anything written as we tell it

pain
loss
trials
absorbed then released

what is left
made to fit our skin
that we wear
that we share
more comfortably
with the world

our stories told with purpose
changed with agenda
modified for each set of ears

hoping for understanding
hoping for bonding

hoping no one is listening between the lines
hoping they are

she will tell me what she can
because of who i am

i will listen
trying not to be who i am

listening between the lines
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I have a fear of the telephone
    it's true
    you won't catch me answering it

    it will be a little automated guy
    my friendly robot

    pretending not to lie to the caller

    I think this fear comes from my little voice

    it's fragile
    it tells all and then some

    I have agreed
    "eyes, the window to the soul" ...

    to this I add ...
    'voice the sound of the spirit'

    a phone conversation
    a sure fire way to listen between the lines

    the voice fills in
    where words are missed
    thoughts are silent
    feelings hidden

    the voice can not hide just as the eyes
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pandora wrote:
    I have a fear of the telephone
    it's true
    you won't catch me answering it

    it will be a little automated guy
    my friendly robot

    pretending not to lie to the caller

    I think this fear comes from my little voice

    it's fragile
    it tells all and then some

    I have agreed
    "eyes, the window to the soul" ...

    to this I add ...
    'voice the sound of the spirit'

    a phone conversation
    a sure fire way to listen between the lines

    the voice fills in
    where words are missed
    thoughts are silent
    feelings hidden

    the voice can not hide just as the eyes

    This is the best thing I've ever read of yours!

    It's so true.
    A wobble or a stutter or just a hesitation is so revealing. :)
    A person can hear a lot of more than words from a conversation.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    edited July 2012
    No listening between the lines...
    not this time
    no need ...

    donuts galore surround the little girl in
    her shopping cart,

    Mama and Grandma filling boxes with the tasty treats.

    Little one is dressed in a bright red and white striped sundress.
    She's holding a colorful sprinkled donut
    almost as large as her face.

    She rubs her eye and gives a yawn
    as I pass by ...

    I think to myself oh she is tuckered, a word my Mama used,
    tuckered.
    For a moment Mama is there with me.

    then...

    Little one spots me and shouts at the top of her lungs ...

    HI!

    sometimes things are just pure ...
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    This is the best thing I've ever read of yours!

    It's so true.
    A wobble or a stutter or just a hesitation is so revealing. :)
    A person can hear a lot of more than words from a conversation.

    thanks justam

    and I'm often the wobbler :lol:
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pandora wrote:
    justam wrote:
    This is the best thing I've ever read of yours!

    It's so true.
    A wobble or a stutter or just a hesitation is so revealing. :)
    A person can hear a lot of more than words from a conversation.

    thanks justam

    and I'm often the wobbler :lol:

    Yeah, me too. More often I stutter when I'm talking really fast. (!)

    When I'm giving lectures, I have to be careful not to get too excited about the topic because then I talk really fast and that happens to me in front of a bunch of students. :oops:

    :D
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    justam wrote:
    This is the best thing I've ever read of yours!

    It's so true.
    A wobble or a stutter or just a hesitation is so revealing. :)
    A person can hear a lot of more than words from a conversation.

    thanks justam

    and I'm often the wobbler :lol:

    Yeah, me too. More often I stutter when I'm talking really fast. (!)

    When I'm giving lectures, I have to be careful not to get too excited about the topic because then I talk really fast and that happens to me in front of a bunch of students. :oops:

    :D
    When I taught that always happened to me too, for me it was just plain nerves though
    so I stopped teaching :lol:
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I think a yawn is a dead give away of a lie...
    is it a fake yawn?

    As with doggies when they do that,
    experts say they are embarrassed cause we are talking about them.
    I can't believe how much they understand ...
    it's got to be evolution.

    So listening behind the wheel while driving,
    just the voice and then a yawn when asked a question,
    or discussing a subject.

    Is that biding a second of time? a deflection? an excuse? change the subject?
    embarrassed at being caught?

    true it could be weariness...

    but listening between the lines one hears something entirely different...

    it hears the mind making use of an involuntary action to protect itself
    from further intrusion...

    and that yawn is just never fulfilled ... it's fake for sure.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I must have failed
    I was blindsided
    I stopped listening between the lines

    I got distracted with my own dreams
    my own hopes fulfilled
    my own wishes come true

    there between the lines
    I could have heard

    the foolishness
    the selfishness
    the carelessness

    if only I had listened
    and then spoke ...


    could I have changed anything

    I was instead

    foolish
    selfish
    careless

    mothers should know better ...
    especially old mothers
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