Inlets

rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
in clicking together
unfamiliar ways to means
even with each other the connection
aligns to balance
straightening as if to electricity
it calls you

how can poetry be about
green grass
red bikes
or your lost mind
when there's crickets
and dew and
chill
and this very day gone

or when there is black at night
and shadows

isn't this the stuff of everybody
or just that previously written
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    this is really awesome...

    i'd love to see "are" where the "is" are...

    great work...
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    this is really awesome...

    i'd love to see "are" where the "is" are...

    great work...

    thank you ~ !

    ....."or when there are black at night" ?

    :wtf:
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    lol... sorry... i meant

    "when there are crickets at night"
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