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DinghyDog
DinghyDog Posts: 587
edited February 2014 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • Cheeks
    Cheeks Posts: 151
    Oooo... the end of that literally sent a chill right up my spine. Nicely done!
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    DinghyDog Posts: 587
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  • Cheeks
    Cheeks Posts: 151
    That whole experience does indeed seem terrifying. Nightmares can stay with you for years.... I still remember one I had when I was about 8. I can imagine your fear when you woke up sick like that.... shudder.
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  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    DinghyDog wrote:
    You weren't some pretty porcelain knickknack
    You weren't a glowing ball of light
    No Chorus sang for me
    You could have been lifted straight from a black and white TV
    The way you appeared to me
    That night

    Your presence, overpowering
    Yet I was calm right to the bone
    I should have been scared
    When you told me what's to come

    And I took it all
    Breathed it in with ease
    Until you said what you said
    And had me begging "Please!"

    The tears, the tears
    Fears of going home
    "Please, no!
    Please, no!"
    Then waking up alone

    Fear enjoys my company
    It visits me at night
    It's done so all my life
    But never this way
    Never did I wake
    Believing I would die.
    wow powerful writing and thanks for sharing more on the background

    this might sound weird ...don't be frightened
    if it ever comes true I think perhaps you will not be scared

    it's like a wheel that keeps turning

    thanks for the insight into you! :D

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