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"But Your So Young!"

AlbertaGirl70_AlbertaGirl70_ Posts: 1,738
edited April 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Once there was a girl,
now a girl without a heart

She used to have everything until her world fell apart
She used to laugh and smile and think about tomorrow

Now all her dreams are dark,
her world filled with sorrow

All she wants to do is live,
continue spreading the love she longs to give

But now she's scared,
of what she's not sure

But she knows the dark would go away if only they could find a cure
I will walk w/my hands bound
I will walk w/my face blood
I will walk w/my shadow flag

Memories back when she was smooth and strong
and waiting for the world to come along...

Eddie solo Vegas Oct 31,Nov 1 2012
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  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
    edited October 2012
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    Post edited by DinghyDog on
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    I like the way this was written...

    but now I'm curious...
  • AlbertaGirl70_AlbertaGirl70_ Posts: 1,738
    DinghyDog wrote:
    I like this one. Thanks for sharing

    Thanks, I appreciate that, I was nervous about posting it :D I've never shared before....
    I will walk w/my hands bound
    I will walk w/my face blood
    I will walk w/my shadow flag

    Memories back when she was smooth and strong
    and waiting for the world to come along...

    Eddie solo Vegas Oct 31,Nov 1 2012
  • AlbertaGirl70_AlbertaGirl70_ Posts: 1,738
    rollings wrote:
    I like the way this was written...

    but now I'm curious...

    Thanks for that...I was scared I was gonna get trashed... :lol:
    Curious about?
    I will walk w/my hands bound
    I will walk w/my face blood
    I will walk w/my shadow flag

    Memories back when she was smooth and strong
    and waiting for the world to come along...

    Eddie solo Vegas Oct 31,Nov 1 2012
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