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Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
edited April 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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I knew it all along, see?
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    The simple choice of the word "stench" makes the tone of this one less positive than it would be if you chose the word "scent" instead. It's interesting... :geek:
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chip the fireman might just end up smelling like roses ....
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    what to say?

    sometime i think to myself and i say to myself
    wish j. america and i lived nearby one another
    we'd go shoot some pool and eat a pizza
    and discuss poetry and the like

    "you got style, kid"
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Yep. And Johnny's got charm to burn too. :D
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  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    edited May 2012
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    Post edited by Chip McFlennigan on
    I knew it all along, see?
  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    chadwick wrote:
    what to say?

    sometime i think to myself and i say to myself
    wish j. america and i lived nearby one another
    we'd go shoot some pool and eat a pizza
    and discuss poetry and the like

    "you got style, kid"

    I'm not much of a pool player, brother.

    I'm down with pizza and beer, though.
    I knew it all along, see?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Hey! It's almost ten o'clock.

    Wake up! :D
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