Let It

rollings

With harmony as our hammer
immediately giving each of us presence
wrapped decayed and freely
freely
hanging onto this sunshine Septermber porch swing and May
rocking it to
all mine jells, shakes, and salt mines
the atlered to which we should go and how is that route
with a venom of poison, saying I'll catch you on
(freeing mausoleums by your presence)
within you
and we should
if we could

did you hear what I said?
I said if we could

DopeBeastie

lol... is this a note to a friend with a decoder ring? Is there a box of cereal I must buy to get one? I cannot follow it at all :):)

rollings

It means we're all gonna die

but we fight and try not to die

but even dying wouldn't be so bad if we could "go"
(or at least meet on the other side)
someone that we love so much



that's clear now right?

the wolf

Death is no match for love.

Good stuff.

DopeBeastie

Rollings wrote:

It means we're all gonna die

but we fight and try not to die

but even dying wouldn't be so bad if we could "go"
(or at least meet on the other side)
someone that we love so much



that's clear now right?

yes, definitely more clear... and... it's "in" there... in the first line, which I really like: "with harmony as our hammer", saying "the goodness of destruction", which is easily death... which I think quite possibly leads to the best of loves... the love without self

thank you so much for expounding - i realize that many poems are private things, but I am always so tempted to pry. i appreciate you indulging me :):)

mysticweed

Rollings wrote:

It means we're all gonna die

but we fight and try not to die

but even dying wouldn't be so bad if we could "go"
(or at least meet on the other side)
someone that we love so much



that's clear now right?

ok

good one