Well

Chip McFlennigan
Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
edited March 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
........
I knew it all along, see?
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    you ended the poem with a new beginning.

    That's not an easy thing to do
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I like this one.
    It has death, peace, and a new beginning.
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    simple in and of itself, but wondering now about the title?
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    DopeBeastie wrote:
    simple in and of itself, but wondering now about the title?

    You're ALWAYS supposed to wonder, thus
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    if there is no pin to context, there is no want to wonder
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    It isn't such a mysterious title if you know that Chip is a fireman in NJ. :?
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    ooh...

    solly
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    justam wrote:
    It isn't such a mysterious title if you know that Chip is a fireman in NJ. :?
    maybe not everyone on here, justly, knows that chip is a fireman in new jersey? but he sure picked a hell of a state to work in :mrgreen:

    did you know that justly plays the tuba? holy shit... no i did not
    well she doesn't
    she plays the harpsichord
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Yeah, I probably shouldn't have said anything. :? :P

    :mrgreen:
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i am a nonprofit fundraising consultant from new jersey and i play guitar occasionally...

Categories