the benefit
justam
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The thing most noticeable about the thoughtless-stream-style
is the way it goes along, goes along, goes along, and
actually takes you somewhere,
even when you have no destination planned!
rushing along, rushing downhill, moving over the rocks
it pulls whatever is in there OUT
I might not know I'm upset, but it shows up
I might not know what's on top of the pile
but it shows up
when we get to the bottom of the rushing water
it's tossed up to look at
and wonder about
is the way it goes along, goes along, goes along, and
actually takes you somewhere,
even when you have no destination planned!
rushing along, rushing downhill, moving over the rocks
it pulls whatever is in there OUT
I might not know I'm upset, but it shows up
I might not know what's on top of the pile
but it shows up
when we get to the bottom of the rushing water
it's tossed up to look at
and wonder about
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