The real possibility...

pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
~~~Slow Wave~~~

riding upon the waves of sleep
I return to the infinite dream

gliding past the days events
and those that have not yet arrived

so deep this ride
I can take nothing there
nor can I bring anything back

the possibilities abound
of what can be found

here in the afterdream
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    edited February 2012
    Blame

    I don't belong here

    'Son, can I give you a ride, there's work in a few hours'

    "No Mom, I'm cool no worries "

    no worries

    I don't belong here

    opening the unfamiliar door
    the cold blast takes my breath away
    then penetrates and ends in a shiver

    'oh burr diddley it's cold'

    ice covered snowbanks shimmer in the moonlit night
    it is just before 3am
    the icy uneven stairs I can barely see
    my cane slips a little to the side

    I whisper...
    'oh geez don't wipe out now he'll blame himself
    I really don't belong here'

    next door a young couple run from their home
    down the long front walk
    a child is wrapped loosely in a blanket sobbing
    they jump into the warming car
    the child is ill
    the parents frantic

    I hope they don't blame themselves

    the car's headlights are on now ...
    I can see better I move quickly
    where did I park I can't remember
    keys in hand...
    did I just pop the trunk or unlock the doors
    where ...
    oh there ... there's the car

    crossing the street

    I'm startled as I turn
    'oh you ...
    you are are so close!'

    he moves quickly in behind me
    his breathing on my neck
    his heavy arm around my shoulder
    drawing me in

    the lighted blade shines in the dim streetlight

    my heart begins to pound
    it fills my chest to my throat making words
    making pleading almost impossible

    'oh no, my boy, NO! he will blame himself'

    there is a car, I scream ...
    'help! he has a knife ... help'

    my words are stifled in the frigid air
    they sound so small
    never in my life have I felt so small

    in the faces of the car's passengers
    I see what is happening
    their fear then shock tell of my demise
    I know in that moment

    my boy ...
    he will blame himself

    funny there is no pain
    just warm on my chest as the blade
    moves across my neck

    his eyes, blacker than the night, hold mine,
    then that crooked smile as he leaves my side

    I don't belong here

    wake up wake up! my pounding heart ...
    wake up!

    'Please Lord ...
    please ...
    don't ever let him blame himself'
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    holy fuck pandora
    that second one is
    is
    wild
    heavy
    deep
    damn
    pandora
    holy fuck
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • pandora wrote:
    so deep this ride
    I can take nothing there
    nor can I bring anything back

    This is really cool.
    I love wave metaphors, and the idea that they only go in one direction...cant go back, but you can fight and swim against the next batch. :)
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    holy fuck pandora
    that second one is
    is
    wild
    heavy
    deep
    damn
    pandora
    holy fuck
    thanks ...

    it tore me up
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    pandora wrote:
    so deep this ride
    I can take nothing there
    nor can I bring anything back

    This is really cool.
    I love wave metaphors, and the idea that they only go in one direction...cant go back, but you can fight and swim against the next batch. :)
    Thanks Jon and its very cool to hear intrepretations of what each other write
    to know what it means to someone else
    that is a bond :D

    Slow wave is a realm of sleep ... the very deepest...

    I am fascinated about what we will find there
  • pandora wrote:
    ~~~Slow Wave~~~

    riding upon the waves of sleep
    I return to the infinite dream

    gliding past the days events
    and those that have not yet arrived

    so deep this ride
    I can take nothing there
    nor can I bring anything back

    the possibilities abound
    of what can be found

    here in the afterdream

    hmmm...nice...i often re-dream my day, and often certain events from multiple angles, each time with varying tactics and outcomes to given situations. I can't truly bring my reality there, nor can I hold onto one of the more preferable outcomes...but I do remember them when I awake, and that gives me guidance...guess that is kinda how I take this for myself, though I definitely see a couple layers.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    pandora wrote:
    ~~~Slow Wave~~~

    riding upon the waves of sleep
    I return to the infinite dream

    gliding past the days events
    and those that have not yet arrived

    so deep this ride
    I can take nothing there
    nor can I bring anything back

    the possibilities abound
    of what can be found

    here in the afterdream

    hmmm...nice...i often re-dream my day, and often certain events from multiple angles, each time with varying tactics and outcomes to given situations. I can't truly bring my reality there, nor can I hold onto one of the more preferable outcomes...but I do remember them when I awake, and that gives me guidance...guess that is kinda how I take this for myself, though I definitely see a couple layers.
    thanks for your words ... depopulationINC

    there is nothing worse for me than to have only a feeling left
    no pictures to see nothing to hold

    then smack down it comes
    it is reality

    I always feel a little sick ... like a different kind of wave

    one of helplessness
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    It's your move ... my eyes meet her blue green eyes .. they glisten

    her soft pretty hand moves the checker
    jumping all mine in a zig zag

    I answer with a pfft!

    Gee Sis, can't you ever let me win...

    Win ...

    I lost when she lost her battle and the emptiness returns to gnaw at my insides


    I miss you ...
    trails from our lips in unison


    her hand moves to wipe my tears and she says
    "Pan your hair is messy, I'll brush it for you,"
    there's a song playing softly and she hums
    and asks how the kids and JB are
    she adds...
    "you treating them right
    remember ... never say don't ... not a need for a no"

    I remember I remember

    she whispers in my ear...

    "the stars are more beautiful than you know
    looking down upon them...
    I bet how many and I often win"

    win she says

    win she says

    win ...

    my words now,
    as I awaken in the late afternoon sun

    she says she wins

    I smile ... my sister has won
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    DinghyDog wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    It's your move ... my eyes meet her blue green eyes .. they glisten

    her soft pretty hand moves the checker
    jumping all mine in a zig zag

    I answer with a pfft!

    Gee Sis, can't you ever let me win...

    Win ...

    I lost when she lost her battle and the emptiness returns to gnaw at my insides


    I miss you ...
    trails from our lips in unison


    her hand moves to wipe my tears and she says
    "Pan your hair is messy, I'll brush it for you,"
    there's a song playing softly and she hums
    and asks how the kids and JB are
    she adds...
    "you treating them right
    remember ... never say don't ... not a need for a no"

    I remember I remember

    she whispers in my ear...

    "the stars are more beautiful than you know
    looking down upon them...
    I bet how many and I often win"

    win she says

    win she says

    win ...

    my words now,
    as I awaken in the late afternoon sun

    she says she wins

    I smile ... my sister has won


    made me cry
    oh...
    thank you for opening your heart and for being touched by my words, my dream.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    DinghyDog wrote:
    pandora, I am looking through my old, old, OLD posts, and I came across this comment that I made. I see you as someone who appreciates dreams very much, so I thought you might be interested to read it....

    "As a kid I used to freak out and worry that my whole life was a dream and that one day I would wake up and I would be someone else completely or even something else. It scared me to think that my whole life as I knew, my friends, my world, may not exist and upon the dreamer's waking I would lose it all. Then I used to feel sorry sometimes for my dreams, that I would create and then destroy their being. Hmm, I think I didn't think like most other 10 year olds."

    dreams have a life of their own ... at least half of ours ;)
    sounds like you knew this from small on, much to learn from that

    one of the scariest moments in my dreams is not being able to remember ...
    who I am, where I've been, something I should know but can't
    that's is being lost not found
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Stars on my Ceiling

    "Thank you Miss Pandi"

    ' You are very welcome, son.'


    There is a constellation for you on my ceiling ...
    child.

    It is one of the brightest
    so it feels very close
    It will never move further away.
    It, like your precious face, stays.

    Occasionally in the night's dream
    a shooting star clears the room

    this is when I hear your words ...

    "Miss Pandi! Do you think I can do it !?"

    my answer hangs in the air

    bringing questions of it's own ...

    was it enough

    was I enough

    was anything ever enough

    the dawn's light fades the stars upon my ceiling
    the picture of you brightens ...

    "nothing you would take
    everything you gave"

    everything you gave ...
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Funny how the sounds of the waking world
    take life in a dream...

    the wind through the porch door
    it was your breath so close
    fresh and cool upon my face
    moving my hair making us smile

    the rain upon the deck
    is was your melody
    played from an unseen instrument
    a beat
    we danced in puddles made of sound

    the far off train whistle that grew close
    now the sound of a lonely high cry
    a bird lost in the night
    circling above our heads
    we found bathed in white
    in the bright light of your song

    funny how you are the sounds both in my dreams and in life
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pandora wrote:
    Funny how the sounds of the waking world
    take life in a dream...

    the wind through the porch door
    it was your breath so close
    fresh and cool upon my face
    moving my hair making us smile

    the rain upon the deck
    is was your melody
    played from an unseen instrument
    a beat
    we danced in puddles made of sound

    the far off train whistle that grew close
    now the sound of a lonely high cry
    a bird lost in the night
    circling above our heads
    we found bathed in white
    in the bright light of your song

    funny how you are the sounds both in my dreams and in life

    I like this one Pandora. :)

    I have found it interesting the way our minds incorporate real sounds into our dreams when we're very deeply asleep.

    One time long ago I lived near a hospital and there was a helicopter hovering over our apartment building (bringing someone for emergency surgery) and I had the strangest dream which included that really loud sound. (!)
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Funny how the sounds of the waking world
    take life in a dream...

    the wind through the porch door
    it was your breath so close
    fresh and cool upon my face
    moving my hair making us smile

    the rain upon the deck
    is was your melody
    played from an unseen instrument
    a beat
    we danced in puddles made of sound

    the far off train whistle that grew close
    now the sound of a lonely high cry
    a bird lost in the night
    circling above our heads
    we found bathed in white
    in the bright light of your song

    funny how you are the sounds both in my dreams and in life

    I like this one Pandora. :)

    I have found it interesting the way our minds incorporate real sounds into our dreams when we're very deeply asleep.

    One time long ago I lived near a hospital and there was a helicopter hovering over our apartment building (bringing someone for emergency surgery) and I had the strangest dream which included that really loud sound. (!)
    thanks justam...
    this helicopter and dream made an impression on you! I have had some like that too
    stayed with me over the years

    they say our memories come from adrenaline bursts ... I have found that to be true also

    ps

    have I told you I love your new avatar... I do! :D
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    No, you haven't told me. :geek:
    Thanks!! :D
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    No, you haven't told me. :geek:
    Thanks!! :D
    welcome :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Recall

    I put the phone down stunned.
    How many minutes passed before I moved?
    I don't know.
    The pleading words on repeat streaming in my head.

    I packed a bag I think though I don't recall what's in it.
    Am I carrying it?
    Did I check it? leave it in the car?
    I don't know.

    It is lost
    you are lost
    I am lost

    everything is lost

    loss loss loss

    I lost

    I can't get the kiosk to work
    damnit!
    can't read the numbers
    can't find the letters
    I don't see the keys

    everything in tear blur ...

    I don't care who sees.

    sees

    sees

    be just be

    be ... be

    bee ... bees ... bees ...

    'you know

    bees

    they can kill you'

  • JBiiJBii Posts: 354
    pandora wrote:
    ~~~Slow Wave~~~

    riding upon the waves of sleep
    I return to the infinite dream

    gliding past the days events
    and those that have not yet arrived

    so deep this ride
    I can take nothing there
    nor can I bring anything back

    the possibilities abound
    of what can be found

    here in the afterdream
    This is cool. The afterdream follows me through the day too, possibilities abound.
    That what you fear the most could meet you halfway
  • JBiiJBii Posts: 354
    Frightened by the real possibility, our life on hold. Can not be another Sister lost to Cancer. I see it her eyes
    each moment we wait to hear. Seems like forever. Last evening over wines she finally cries, she said a selfish cry.
    "This is not about me" stubbornly she tries to make that so but I know she just can't do this again. Not again ...
    That what you fear the most could meet you halfway
  • JBiiJBii Posts: 354
    pandora wrote:
    Funny how the sounds of the waking world
    take life in a dream...

    the wind through the porch door
    it was your breath so close
    fresh and cool upon my face
    moving my hair making us smile

    the rain upon the deck
    is was your melody
    played from an unseen instrument
    a beat
    we danced in puddles made of sound

    the far off train whistle that grew close
    now the sound of a lonely high cry
    a bird lost in the night
    circling above our heads
    we found bathed in white
    in the bright light of your song

    funny how you are the sounds both in my dreams and in life
    beautiful

    "life makes our dreams and dreams make our lives"

    i awoke to a sound tears softly falling from our dream
    her dream was my dream for a time
    our hushed voice pleading to the unknown bargaining with words inaudible
    echoing in the dark
    our slow deep breathing
    in unison
    forever

    "am i in your dream or are you in mine"

    and i love a far off train whistle but you already know that
    That what you fear the most could meet you halfway
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