Waiting here for you

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited January 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Tell me what it is that started the fire inside of you
I see it burning in your eyes
I can hear the screams that hide inside your mind
And the lies that you try to hide.

Running from the demons that chase thru the night
Your screams are giving you away
You’ve lost the magic inside of you
You’ve given it away for something new
Now what are you going to do.

You have a fire burning inside of you

I see the hatchet swinging
I see it in your hands
You’re looking for a victim but you don’t understand
The blood on the floor is yours and I can taste it
In the air when you scream.

Put the hatchet down
Close your eyes and look inside
I’m waiting here for you
With a message written in magic right here in my hand
I’m going to give it to you.

And when the screaming stops
And the blood no longer flows I’ll be waiting here for you
In this silent room with a look of what’s inside of you.

I see the hatchet swinging
I see it in your hands
You’re looking for a victim but you don’t understand
The blood on the floor is yours and I can taste it
In the air when you scream so put the hatchet down.

You have a fire burning inside of you
And I’m waiting here for you.

Godfather.
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    oh man i KNOW that one
    i lived it
    and came out the other side

    love reading your stuff
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    StillHere wrote:
    oh man i KNOW that one
    i lived it
    and came out the other side

    love reading your stuff

    thanks jo ! how the heck are you doing ?

    Godfather.
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    Godfather. wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    oh man i KNOW that one
    i lived it
    and came out the other side

    love reading your stuff

    thanks jo ! how the heck are you doing ?

    Godfather.

    how the HECK???? :lol:

    nice and cozy Jeff..nice and cozy
    you?
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • enjoyed that. thanks
    Into the Wild Things
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Godfather. wrote:
    Tell me what it is that started the fire inside of you

    You’ve lost the magic inside of you

    The blood on the floor is yours and I can taste it
    In the air when you scream.

    With a message written in magic....

    ....... I’ll be waiting here for you
    In this silent room with a look of what’s inside of you.

    Godfather.

    killer

    and the first line
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thanks you guys !
    I'm trying to write a heavy metal song (lyrics) for a friends band, subject matter is so huge but limited in a way, when he gives me a tape of a song it might be easyer.
    Godfather.
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    It's something when you read something and feel as though it could have been written for you. This is something!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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