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losing poetry

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited January 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
just wrote some amazing lines online here
clicked submit
it didn't go through as i was not logged in
i am devastated

exploding within vices
a lonliness unalone
the agony in a night can bring down every curtain and tear

the medication does not ring as so
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    feel your pain
    been there
    done that
    no getting it back
    start again
    and hope the words
    ring true
    my friend
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    chadwick wrote:
    just wrote some amazing lines online here
    clicked submit
    it didn't go through as i was not logged in
    i am devastated

    exploding within vices
    a lonliness unalone
    the agony in a night can bring down every curtain and tear

    the medication does not ring as so

    I have also done that...so now it is habbit to hilite and copy everything I do
    just in case....... :D and it has come in handy on more than once. :lol:
    another idea is that I do most of my stuff on an e-mail to hotvallywriters.com then go back
    and copy and past on here.

    Godfather.
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    Godfather. wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    just wrote some amazing lines online here
    clicked submit
    it didn't go through as i was not logged in
    i am devastated

    exploding within vices
    a lonliness unalone
    the agony in a night can bring down every curtain and tear

    the medication does not ring as so

    I have also done that...so now it is habbit to hilite and copy everything I do
    just in case....... :D and it has come in handy on more than once. :lol:
    another idea is that I do most of my stuff on an e-mail to hotvallywriters.com then go back
    and copy and past on here.

    Godfather.

    i do the same thing...after many kicks in my own butt
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    ladies inspire desire
    they do kill me
    i will bleed for one and two and many
    losing words...love poetry can't be had
    so it is when lost in the breast
    her breathing a go
    mine tangled up in there

    the wind has taken what it wants
    kissing-words riding happened
    and disappeared here within
    the dazed
    are we the irreplaceable
    no one has this and ever will
    but we
    this ownness...a unique love
    grown at our leisure and pleasure
    no
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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