Mother-Naked

pepper
pepper Posts: 155
edited December 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Isn’t it something
when you realise
that you destroyed the sun,
and it’s very tears
became the candles
that helped you find your way.
And that you spent that journey
drinking whiskey
and wine
and getting high
just to see yourself
sober.
Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    WOW !!!! this is great !

    Godfather.
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    and the 16,000th poem of the PJ poetry forum
  • lobb152
    lobb152 Posts: 193
    This is one of my favorites.
    I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lobb152 wrote:
    This is one of my favorites.

    your work in hottvally writers is awesome !


    Godfather.
  • stargirl69
    stargirl69 Posts: 6,387
    This is amazing

    and getting high
    just to see yourself
    sober.

    Inspired words .. thank you
    “There should be a place where only the things you want to happen, happen”
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like this
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    This is rockin'.
    I knew it all along, see?
  • pepper
    pepper Posts: 155
    Thank you for all your kind words!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    pepper wrote:
    Thank you for all your kind words!
    How about you hit us with some more words of the poetic variety?
    I knew it all along, see?
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    Jamuel El Saxophone wrote:
    pepper wrote:
    Thank you for all your kind words!
    How about you hit us with some more words of the poetic variety?


    You mean like THIS

    Altered
    by pepper » December 29th, 2011, 3:30 pm

    Shadows sit
    beneath my eyelids
    silhouettes
    pirouetting perfectly
    they feel like rain
    in search of an alter
    candles flame
    no need to close my eyes
    anymore
    to see my darkness
    unfold
    and hold, the
    visions
    I once held
    so close, I
    almost closed
    my eyes
    forever.
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    Rollings wrote:
    Jamuel El Saxophone wrote:
    pepper wrote:
    Thank you for all your kind words!
    How about you hit us with some more words of the poetic variety?


    You mean like THIS

    Altered
    by pepper » December 29th, 2011, 3:30 pm

    Shadows sit
    beneath my eyelids
    silhouettes
    pirouetting perfectly
    they feel like rain
    in search of an alter
    candles flame
    no need to close my eyes
    anymore
    to see my darkness
    unfold
    and hold, the
    visions
    I once held
    so close, I
    almost closed
    my eyes
    forever.

    Ah, more slick writing by pepper accompanied by instant pwnage by Rollings.

    Not gonna lie, I'm a bit aroused.
    I knew it all along, see?

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