go (part II or not)

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited November 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
coffee after taste going on
my mouth chanting behind my back
i hear but don't and a star filled dome lifting

this is your mother my own father
let me hold you
they all listened
none spoken was minds
went together webbed interlocked

each destiny burning brightly inviting each one onward
you could see all the hills roll out and on well shifting meadows
all as lovely as blooming
and you could tell
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chadwick wrote:
    none spoken was minds
    went together webbed interlocked


    you could see all the hills roll out and on well shifting meadows
    all as lovely as blooming
    and you could tell

    very cool
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    I feel that I could read this many times, and get something new out of it each. I will return to this
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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