A sincere endeavor

justam

Sounds come in, and swirl around the space inside
vowels and breath and syllables, meaning...
my question,
what does it mean?
sounds come near, and swirl fast or slow, outside
consonants and parts of phrases and bits of sense
all ringing, tingling,
but what does it mean?
how does it feel, what does it seem like, all language absorbed?
spinning sounds circle fast or slow
to try to make sense, I let them glow
I open the gates hoping unblocked,
sounds come in, they sink through or do mingle with my cells
until, until, until,
quite still
they mean something true to me

rollings

This is really neat!
I especially like the way the last line goes

justam

Rollings wrote:

This is really neat!
I especially like the way the last line goes

thanks