all of of time

depopulationINC
depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
edited October 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So what if I breathe
so what if I choose
it's my life
I choose like this all of of time
so what if try
and what if I lose
it's my right
people are failing all of the time
all of the time
all of the time oh this aching life

go say what you want
go show me your might
it's your right
I choose like this all of of time
go you might be wrong
could still be right
people are failing all of their life



hope that reads ok....it is the wee hours of the am here
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    I think it reads good. I can see your words clearly at 10am
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  • StillHere
    StillHere Posts: 7,795
    reads very well

    and the message is loud and clear :)
    peace,
    jo

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    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~

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