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justam
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Kindling and bayleaves and pine cones
I'm collecting them in my mind
to make the fire smell better than average
and better than dull
and I'm sorry I can't give dull people an imagination
well, actually, I'm not sorry
I'm glad I can't
it makes people individuals
and some people can't imagine their way out of a paperbag
and that's not my problem
I'm glad it's not my problem
I don't wanna have to worry about anyone else's happiness these days
only my own
(and my family's)
carry a jug of water on my head like a pottery hat?
no problem
turn over every leaf to find something good?
I'm learning
read every last book I can find on my favorite study topic?
you know I am
I've found my kindling, I have some logs, and I picked up those other items for scent
I think I'm set cuz I always carry a match!
I'm collecting them in my mind
to make the fire smell better than average
and better than dull
and I'm sorry I can't give dull people an imagination
well, actually, I'm not sorry
I'm glad I can't
it makes people individuals
and some people can't imagine their way out of a paperbag
and that's not my problem
I'm glad it's not my problem
I don't wanna have to worry about anyone else's happiness these days
only my own
(and my family's)
carry a jug of water on my head like a pottery hat?
no problem
turn over every leaf to find something good?
I'm learning
read every last book I can find on my favorite study topic?
you know I am
I've found my kindling, I have some logs, and I picked up those other items for scent
I think I'm set cuz I always carry a match!
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that's some fire you got there, justly
very nicefor poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0 -
I'm a little iffy on the word "cuz" but hey, that's nit-picking because this is one very fine piece of poetry! It brings the senses alive. It's poem I can touch, smell, and feel and it also gets into my head. Nicely done!"It's a sad and beautiful world"-Roberto Benigni0
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Thanks for reading it!&&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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I like the analogy of gathering to gathering thoughts. Nice.The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key0
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