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Chip McFlennigan
Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
edited September 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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I knew it all along, see?
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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    johnny america wrote:
    there is a tall tree in your yard
    green
    tho' i envy you

    i whisper at night to myself
    fearing the owls are listening
    and the possums, i'm sure
    are listening

    in my driveway
    long free of any green
    grass
    tho' i envy you

    even though you left me here
    in this bed, freezing and blue in the tv light
    envying those closing their glowing with kisses
    and making me sick
    green


    johnny america?

    you write dem good poems
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    Thank ya kindly, sir.
    I knew it all along, see?
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    johnny america wrote:
    Thank ya kindly, sir.

    ahem...default.jpg

    you're welcome!
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    Shit!

    Sorry, didn't realize you were a woman.

    I know YOU PEOPLE tend to get offended easily.

    My apologies.
    I knew it all along, see?
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    johnny america wrote:
    I know YOU PEOPLE tend to get offended easily.



    HAHAHAHA




    like the poem though! Wish I could write in this style more liberally. I haven't a style myself...i just kinda have no form and hope it makes sense :)

    Well done
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • vogonpoetbythelake
    vogonpoetbythelake Posts: 2,146
    Thank you for your poem, it challenged me and has inspired me to write into the sleepless nights

    You come to my heart softly and slap me hard where I live
    You with your steel trappings caught as an animal biting the hand of its saviour
    Save our hour
    Savvy Whore

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