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acrossssSsssshittt
acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited April 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
we ain’t grown apart

…but I think I’ve changed
and You don’t make things
stay the same
something tells me You

…just ain’t the same

I would hurt
and I would know pain

now it’s dreams
that keep me awake
something tells me
that You

ain’t far away
for in my dreams
there’s pain
I awake

…some things always go away and

an angel always comes my way

…I dream, you
know I could never paint
….don’t go away
just cuz I could never stay

there are some things
that always stay the same
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  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Powerful stuff
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    I like the way this one
    goes
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    angel, this is soooooo beautiful
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i believe this could be many pages long. probably daily you could add a piece to this. a poetry book on angels maybe, yes/no? i like your views.

    angels. i have needed a few of them in my time. i am sure they have been around in different forms. sometimes i believe they have saved me from myself or other.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    tremors
    rrrolllings
    angel : )

    you say nice things

    ...chad,
    I've known many angels
    and I believe you got wings
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    we ain’t grown apart

    …but I think I’ve changed
    and You don’t make things
    stay the same
    something tells me You

    …just ain’t the same

    I would hurt
    and I would know pain

    now it’s dreams
    that keep me awake
    something tells me
    that You

    ain’t far away
    for in my dreams
    there’s pain
    I awake

    …some things always go away and

    an angel always comes my way

    …I dream, you
    know I could never paint
    ….don’t go away
    just cuz I could never stay

    there are some things
    that always stay the same
    this has great rhythm
    flows so easily and feels the same

    i like angel :D

    I've been thinking lately ...
    all good things come to an end
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    tremors
    rrrolllings
    angel :)

    you say nice things

    ...chad,
    I've known many angels
    and I believe you got wings

    :P

    :thumbup:
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    pandora wrote:
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    we ain’t grown apart

    …but I think I’ve changed
    and You don’t make things
    stay the same
    something tells me You

    …just ain’t the same

    I would hurt
    and I would know pain

    now it’s dreams
    that keep me awake
    something tells me
    that You

    ain’t far away
    for in my dreams
    there’s pain
    I awake

    …some things always go away and

    an angel always comes my way

    …I dream, you
    know I could never paint
    ….don’t go away
    just cuz I could never stay

    there are some things
    that always stay the same
    this has great rhythm
    flows so easily and feels the same

    i like angel :D

    I've been thinking lately ...
    all good things come to an end

    I aim for rhythm pandora! .. in life ..and otherwise... so it's amongst the best things you could've said

    thank you
  • DinghyDog
    DinghyDog Posts: 587
    edited October 2012
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    Post edited by DinghyDog on
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    one of my favorites ever written! :D

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