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Submission and Fire

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited September 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Standing on the edge of insanity
Standing in the pouring rain
Dancing in the fire of submission
Waiting for the night to come
Just to kill the pain.

Holy Angel lend me your sight
Hold me with your wings of forgiveness
Teach me how to fly.

Submissions and fire
The art of desire is burning inside of me
And I can’t stop the rain.

Holy Angel I’m looking for you
But I can’t see thru the sun
Standing on the edge of insanity
With nowhere to run
Standing in the pouring rain.

Waiting for the night to come
Every blink is a dream of you
Waiting for the night to come.

Submissions and fire
And I can’t stop the rain
and the art of desire
Is burning inside of me.

Burning inside of you.
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    sing it loudly, Godfather. i hear music when reading this. it's even possible for me to almost sing along as i read this. very nice. thank you, Sir.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    yes!

    I too hear voices sing... and it rings like a stevie nicks from back in fuckin '82!
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    yes!

    I too hear voices sing... and it rings like a stevie nicks from back in fuckin '82!


    we might have partied back in the 80's :lol: ....but this short term memory loss is killin me :lol:


    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    chadwick wrote:
    sing it loudly, Godfather. i hear music when reading this. it's even possible for me to almost sing along as i read this. very nice. thank you, Sir.
    if you can play piano we'll work on the next big hit we can call the album "Chadwicks world of wonderful noise" :lol:

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Godfather. wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    sing it loudly, Godfather. i hear music when reading this. it's even possible for me to almost sing along as i read this. very nice. thank you, Sir.
    if you can play piano we'll work on the next big hit we can call the album "Chadwicks world of wonderful noise" :lol:

    Godfather.
    i took piano lessons as a youngster, very young. i can't play the piano, Sir. mom can though.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Very fine words Godfather - which strike a chord with me tonight
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    tremors wrote:
    Very fine words Godfather - which strike a chord with me tonight

    I hope your night settled into a good morning with no complications.
    thank you all for the kind reply's.

    Godfather.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Godfather. wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    Very fine words Godfather - which strike a chord with me tonight

    I hope your night settled into a good morning with no complications.

    :thumbup:

    All is well, thanks - have some female companionship this weekend. I think I'm going to have to start writing some different kinds of poems soon :lol:


    (thanks Godfather)
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    Standing on the edge of insanity

    . . .

    Submissions and fire
    The art of desire is burning inside of me
    And I can’t stop the rain.

    Holy Angel I’m looking for you
    But I can’t see thru the sun
    Standing on the edge of insanity
    With nowhere to run
    Standing in the pouring rain.

    Waiting for the night to come
    Every blink is a dream of you
    Waiting for the night to come.

    . . .


    holy shit gf
    this is great
    "standing on the edge of insanity with nowhere to run"
    "every blink is a dream of you"
    awesomely awesome
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    AbsoLutAngel wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    Standing on the edge of insanity

    . . .

    Submissions and fire
    The art of desire is burning inside of me
    And I can’t stop the rain.

    Holy Angel I’m looking for you
    But I can’t see thru the sun
    Standing on the edge of insanity
    With nowhere to run
    Standing in the pouring rain.

    Waiting for the night to come
    Every blink is a dream of you
    Waiting for the night to come.

    . . .


    holy shit gf
    this is great
    "standing on the edge of insanity with nowhere to run"
    "every blink is a dream of you"
    awesomely awesome


    Thanks ! ;)

    Godfather.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Godfather. wrote:
    Standing on the edge of insanity
    Standing in the pouring rain
    Dancing in the fire of submission
    Waiting for the night to come
    Just to kill the pain.

    Holy Angel lend me your sight
    Hold me with your wings of forgiveness
    Teach me how to fly.

    Submissions and fire
    The art of desire is burning inside of me
    And I can’t stop the rain.

    Holy Angel I’m looking for you
    But I can’t see thru the sun
    Standing on the edge of insanity
    With nowhere to run
    Standing in the pouring rain.

    Waiting for the night to come
    Every blink is a dream of you
    Waiting for the night to come.

    Submissions and fire
    And I can’t stop the rain
    and the art of desire
    Is burning inside of me.

    Burning inside of you.

    bravo
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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