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Chapter 664 Of A Broken Heart

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited September 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Fighting a losing battle with tears
In public transport
I thought I had more class than that

Guess class doesn't apply to me anymore
I don't know what does

Am I classified as a human being, still?
Or just a wreck
Ignored and left to my own devices?

Would someone just please ask me if I'm ok
Even if it might make me cry
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Not as happy with this (weird to say that) as the other one, too many thoughts squeezed in there, perhaps?
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    I just read it - and it got to me. Very open - very honest. I like these pieces of writing a very lot
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    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Emmi, this one seems fine to me too!
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    eMMI wrote:
    Would someone just please ask me if I'm ok
    Even if it might make me cry

    I like this piece a lot eMMI.

    I can easily relate to it.

    The part above got to me, been there.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Thank you all.
    the wolf wrote:
    eMMI wrote:
    Would someone just please ask me if I'm ok
    Even if it might make me cry

    I like this piece a lot eMMI.

    I can easily relate to it.

    The part above got to me, been there.

    Thank you too. Sorry you've been there.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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