Entropy

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  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    knots in the stomach
    not so frequent nowadays
    but I still know how to untie them
    too much practice
    wish I could show you how I did it
    really wish there was that magic wand
    that set the insides free

    instead face stretched
    careering at high speed
    body tense
    tensed to sense such pain
    and not being able to do a thing about it

    here,
    at least take hold of my hand
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  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    wow, just caught up on this thread. it's wonderful. striking and chaotic and calm at the same time.?
    tremors wrote:
    In the deep part of the night
    You will come to know yourself
    In the true part of the light
    You will be shown the way

    This is perfect for me, tonight and most days.
    Glad I read it.
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    PilateOfTheStorm wrote:
    wow, just caught up on this thread. it's wonderful. striking and chaotic and calm at the same time.?
    tremors wrote:
    In the deep part of the night
    You will come to know yourself
    In the true part of the light
    You will be shown the way

    This is perfect for me, tonight and most days.
    Glad I read it.


    Thanks Pilate

    You always have the kindest of words for me. Thank you
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Good thread!
  • brianlux
    brianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 43,674
    Nicely done, tremors. Entropy is such a good word- it's almost a poem all by itself.

    Entropy

    And yet you've added so much!
    "It's a sad and beautiful world"
    -Roberto Benigni

  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Thanks Fin, thankyou Brian

    Yes Entropy is a great word, powerful concept. It always makes me imagine orange glowing coals cast adrift into the infinite ocean of space
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  • brianlux
    brianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 43,674
    Entropy Definition 2.

    Now you done it.
    Got me thinking
    Aligning
    Sorting
    Sifting
    Stacking
    and categorizing my thoughts
    Before they all
    Succumb to
    Chaos.
    "It's a sad and beautiful world"
    -Roberto Benigni

  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    brianlux wrote:
    Entropy Definition 2.

    Now you done it.
    Got me thinking
    Aligning
    Sorting
    Sifting
    Stacking
    and categorizing my thoughts
    Before they all
    Succumb to
    Chaos.


    One by one we stack these bricks
    Higher and higher
    Thicker and thicker
    And just as we finish

    Smashed apart by a delinquent child
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  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I love these! Well done
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • brianlux
    brianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 43,674
    I love these too,
    Well Done,
    Yet in the swirl
    Of an avatar gaze
    And the flashes
    In Eddie's face I
    Find my eyes
    Turned to glaze
    Transfixed by a vertigo
    Inducing daze.

    :) :-| :shock: :-o :crazy:
    "It's a sad and beautiful world"
    -Roberto Benigni

  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    brianlux wrote:
    I love these too,
    Well Done,
    Yet in the swirl
    Of an avatar gaze
    And the flashes
    In Eddie's face I
    Find my eyes
    Turned to glaze
    Transfixed by a vertigo
    Inducing daze.

    :) :-| :shock: :-o :crazy:

    :D

    I think it's time to tone down the avatar for a bit - while I find one that doesn't induce headaches! ;)
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  • brianlux
    brianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 43,674
    tremors wrote:
    brianlux wrote:
    I love these too,
    Well Done,
    Yet in the swirl
    Of an avatar gaze
    And the flashes
    In Eddie's face I
    Find my eyes
    Turned to glaze
    Transfixed by a vertigo
    Inducing daze.

    :) :-| :shock: :-o :crazy:

    :D

    I think it's time to tone down the avatar for a bit - while I find one that doesn't induce headaches! ;)

    It really was an amzing avatar- I just get vertigo easily. I'm always amazed by the interesing avatars that show up here. And anything that inspires poetry is always good in some ways! :D
    "It's a sad and beautiful world"
    -Roberto Benigni

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