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August 29th, 2004

the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
edited August 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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we walked for miles that night‬
‪hand in hand, never wanting the sun to rise‬
the dust gathering between our toes‬
much like the heaviness on our hearts‬
500 plates in the street broken,‬
‪just like our dreams‬
now just memories of a forgotten lust of another kind‬
the water current was swift and deadly‬
the crossing would be of great risk‬
one we were both willing to take‬
the swollen river hungry for our flesh,‬
would be deprived this night‬
in the soft light of the moon‬
you recognized yourself in me,‬
and me in the reflection of the black water‬
and with that recognition‬
came fear‬
fear of the unknown‬
fear of the past, the present‬
and what was to be the future‬
like some unwanted wedding dress‬
discarded were our plans….‬
we left them there,‬
burning‬
on the banks of the Ohio
Peace, Love.

"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    that sounds fun
    nice job, Sir

    for me it's the skunk or mississippi
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Beautiful Steve....


    fear of the unknown
    fear of the past, the present
    and what was to be the future
    like some unwanted wedding dress
    discarded were our plans...
    we left them there
    burning
    on the banks of Ohio....
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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    I've read this a few times now - and it's got me every time. Great poem
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    yes, had to read this twice
    fucking beautiful, steve
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    This was to be included in a section called "Reflections" in the poetry book I'm still sitting on.

    Thank you very much. You are all too kind.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    the wolf wrote:
    This was to be included in a section called "Reflections" in the poetry book I'm still sitting on.

    Thank you very much. You are all too kind.
    lots of hard work there, buddy. i am requesting a signed copy when you get your filled box of your book.
    exciting stuff, Sir.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    This was to be included in a section called "Reflections" in the poetry book I'm still sitting on.

    Thank you very much. You are all too kind.
    lots of hard work there, buddy. i am requesting a signed copy when you get your filled box of your book.
    exciting stuff, Sir.


    oooooo
    me too'
    me too'
    me too
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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