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...When the wind went you...

rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
edited October 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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when the wind went you
further drifted and
now its only dreams I see
I see you and I meet you
but in dreams

we would spin and we would
come to this and we would
sit and stare at stars and we would
sit and stare at stars
we’d stare at stars

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All the rain would fall from you
(Bringing rain and we would)
All the days you came right through
(We would turn and we would)
Come to mind I’d think again
I’d bring again and I would you….

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Days arriving and
we're the storms surviving (edited from: whether storms surviving)
What we said we’d plan to do
I never heard you say with you
Not say with you

Most of all when you
Brought the rain drops
You commented on souls
you said you met and
showed to love so many souls

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Can’t contain the hours we gave
(Can’t control what we said)
Time is true on every page
(Catching waves what we made)
We don’t own the mind bend too
from me from you

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Can’t ignore the fire in soul
(Can’t invole without them)
Time in this and yet untold
(Can’t involve the can’t in)
Times you know we’d sing from soul
we'd sing from soul
and we would…..

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Feel your love growing
Only when I’m going
Why when things are gone
do we first wish them in our hands
our hands
our hands. . . . . . . .

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(there's actually music to this too wink winky face ;);) sunglasses ;)8-)8-) winky sunglasses 8-) winky ;);) one winky ;) two :twisted: 8-)8-);) )
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Comments

  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    song is the first thought i had
    plus it's just damn beautiful
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chickweed wrote:
    song is the first thought i had
    plus it's just damn beautiful

    I actually have the song on a .wmv file...its me and accoustic guitar...and I'm hum/mumbling/singing the melody line...these lyrics came..well just a day or two before I posted them.. Dya wanna hear it?

    I just realized "hum" and "mumble" combined could be "humble" (which you had better be if you're humming and mumbling and singing at the same time :shock: )

    Thank you, Chickweed
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    I love this. What talent
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    tremors wrote:
    I love this. What talent


    yes she is full of it
    (talent)
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chickweed wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    I love this. What talent


    yes she is full of it
    (talent)


    aww, you guys...
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    totally agree with what chickweed and tremors have said

    wish I could hear the tune too .... maybe someday... hot dog!

    love it Dang Dang... very awesome!
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Dang Dang wrote:
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Days arriving and
    we're the storms surviving (edited from: whether storms surviving)
    What we said we’d plan to do
    I never heard you say with you

    oh God that's one of the best verses I've ever read.... g..goddammm soouul
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    Dang Dang wrote:
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Days arriving and
    we're the storms surviving (edited from: whether storms surviving)
    What we said we’d plan to do
    I never heard you say with you

    oh God that's one of the best verses I've ever read.... g..goddammm soouul

    sooouuuullll (and sound) acrosssssSHSHSHHSHSHSHittttzzzzzz
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Rollings wrote:
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    Dang Dang wrote:
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Days arriving and
    we're the storms surviving (edited from: whether storms surviving)
    What we said we’d plan to do
    I never heard you say with you

    oh God that's one of the best verses I've ever read.... g..goddammm soouul

    sooouuuullll (and sound) acrosssssSHSHSHHSHSHSHittttzzzzzz

    aahh shhittt you killlin me as I go motherfuck crazzy
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Rollings wrote:
    chickweed wrote:
    song is the first thought i had
    plus it's just damn beautiful

    I actually have the song on a .wmv file...its me and accoustic guitar...and I'm hum/mumbling/singing the melody line...these lyrics came..well just a day or two before I posted them.. Dya wanna hear it?

    I just realized "hum" and "mumble" combined could be "humble" (which you had better be if you're humming and mumbling and singing at the same time :shock: )

    Thank you, Chickweed

    now having heard it
    you should have a stage at PJ25
    can i drive your bus?
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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