It Was
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It was a dream
it was a hope
it was a goal
It was a token
of something bigger than we
it carried me overture, setting the flame to any fire you see
It set me sailing on a four-ship course through tumultuous waters while staying steadily adrift on top of waves, it did not waver the whole time through this
It was
It was our big dream built on words
built on breath
It was felt
it was danced to
it was on top
you can see
that it was felt
It was the candle burning quiet solemn nights
when all that warmed the darkness were voices hushed into deep sleep
It was going to happen
when we said we were touching
it was actually all the poems that you see
it was the most pure joy I could turn to
parachutes
you lived it
you just fulfilled it
with someone who is
not me
it was
this just can't be
It was a dream
it was a hope
it was a goal
It was a token
of something bigger than we
it carried me overture, setting the flame to any fire you see
It set me sailing on a four-ship course through tumultuous waters while staying steadily adrift on top of waves, it did not waver the whole time through this
It was
It was our big dream built on words
built on breath
It was felt
it was danced to
it was on top
you can see
that it was felt
It was the candle burning quiet solemn nights
when all that warmed the darkness were voices hushed into deep sleep
It was going to happen
when we said we were touching
it was actually all the poems that you see
it was the most pure joy I could turn to
parachutes
you lived it
you just fulfilled it
with someone who is
not me
it was
this just can't be
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feeling like that hurts pretty bad
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
Hope tomorrow is a better day for you. Put some PJ on and you will feel better!
A few beers will help too -
There are so many pieces here that I really enjoy, but even though I have this... love affair with words, I usually can't find the RIGHT words to express how some of the poems here touch me.
I'm really fucking tired, and I'm getting ready to ramble... more than I already have.
My point?
This is really, really fucking good.
Right time for me I guess? I don't know.
Dang Dang, you are a jewel here.
Thank You.
-steve
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
I don't know what to say
thank you for that beautiful compliment
I'm smiling and it made my day
fucking wow
"what a long, strange trip it's been"
it's nice that someone said somethin to make you smile cuz hurting like this can really suck even if the words that come out are as good as this
Send my credentials to the house of detention
You probably don't want to, although you probably already do.
You know...what you thought was,
and of course its really important
its just that it wasn't
and your heart falls from a higher-than-it-probably-should-have-been spot (like say, one's sleeve)
and now is walking around doing a poor job of feigning unscathedness
I get thinner every time
Stretched line by line
Ghostly
Spectre like a gaunt face
Looking beyond the mirror into some place else
Friends wouldn't recognise me
I don't recognise me
The thousand yard stare
Just try and keep it away from company
Send my credentials to the house of detention