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or was it hash (part I)

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited February 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
just open
he's goin
and down it all comes
here or there over the line
left behind
easy crazy on out
(easy crazy on out)... (deleted)

freedom would be these wheels
rollin on out
easy on out
reporting sunbeams squeeling tires
each one on fire
so many sunships leading

each large balloon (airship)
a skyburst going down
fallin' apart pinks
oranges
and grapes
every cloud gone
then back
or was it hash
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    It sounds like a song
    a good song, actually
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Dang Dang wrote:
    It sounds like a song
    a good song, actually
    yeah i just wrote it and was jammin out quite nicely
    fun little diddy

    aint no guitar player
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chadwick wrote:
    Dang Dang wrote:
    It sounds like a song
    a good song, actually
    yeah i just wrote it and was jammin out quite nicely
    fun little diddy

    aint no guitar player

    I am :twisted:

    so I've got the whole melody I think
    some words will have to go somewhere
    and you'll just need a few bridge words..
    its funk country
    good to go
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Dang Dang wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    Dang Dang wrote:
    It sounds like a song
    a good song, actually
    yeah i just wrote it and was jammin out quite nicely
    fun little diddy

    aint no guitar player

    I am :twisted:

    so I've got the whole melody I think
    some words will have to go somewhere
    and you'll just need a few bridge words..
    its funk country
    good to go
    badass
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    edited July 2011
    Dang Dang wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    Dang Dang wrote:
    It sounds like a song
    a good song, actually
    yeah i just wrote it and was jammin out quite nicely
    fun little diddy

    aint no guitar player

    I am :twisted:

    so I've got the whole melody I think
    some words will have to go somewhere
    and you'll just need a few bridge words..
    its funk country
    good to go


    You two sound like an awesome poetry fuelled Supergroup in the making!
    Post edited by tremors on
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    edited July 2011
    tremors wrote:
    Dang Dang wrote:
    I am :twisted:

    so I've got the whole melody I think
    some words will have to go somewhere
    and you'll just need a few bridge words..
    its funk country
    good to go


    You two sound like an awesome poetry fuelled Supergroup in the making!

    Poetry
    the breakfast of champions
    or
    Post edited by rollings on
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    chadwick wrote:
    just open
    he's goin
    and down it all comes
    here or there over the line
    left behind
    easy crazy on out
    (easy crazy on out)... (deleted)

    freedom would be these wheels
    rollin on out
    easy on out
    reporting sunbeams squeeling tires
    each one on fire
    so many sunships leading

    each large balloon (airship)
    a skyburst going down
    fallin' apart pinks
    oranges
    and grapes
    every cloud gone
    then back
    or was it hash

    it be hash
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    tonight
    farmers work the mountains

    yes ok
    thank you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    yee hawsh
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