Dream A Little Dream With Me

pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
edited September 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lovely Life

I saw you, young man.
I have missed you.

Your crumpled fishing hat,
lightish curls forming around it,
your smile lights the darken theatre.
I could not make out your face....
but it is you.

You move quickly across the crowded room
to me.
We embrace and float
together as one
over the crimson carpet
for ever.

I whispered in your ear,
without thought....
Mama is proud
so very proud of you.
She watches over you
but still for her.
Your lovely life ... still hers.

The snow covered icy Lake Michigan,
cold like death, warm with memories
now it's brightest wakes me...
but still you stay young man.

Love still stays young man
and we miss you.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is full of love Pandora. I like it. :thumbup:
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    This one is full of love Pandora. I like it. :thumbup:
    thanks kind lady, always means a lot to me :D

    yes it is a message of love

    oh

    and

    PLAY THE SOUTH! ...hee hee 8-)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    hee hee :mrgreen::lol:
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  • pandora wrote:

    You move quickly across the crowded room
    to me.
    We embrace and float
    together as one
    over the crimson carpet
    for ever.

    very real ... very nice
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    pandora wrote:

    You move quickly across the crowded room
    to me.
    We embrace and float
    together as one
    over the crimson carpet
    for ever.

    very real ... very nice
    :D :wave:

    funny you should say
    cause it was the most vivid lovely part of the dream
    it still feels very real
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Very nice Pandi- You say this is part of a dream.... I need to start dreaming again.... :D

    Thank you for sharing.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    mikalina wrote:
    Very nice Pandi- You say this is part of a dream.... I need to start dreaming again.... :D

    Thank you for sharing.
    :wave:

    thank you for listening :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I dreamed of a thick forest,
    the kind where light can barely make its way to the bottom.

    All the way to the moss covered floor.

    Dappled sunlight was showing me the way,
    the way to nowhere,
    and it felt good to be there with the trees.

    I knew it was somewhere cause you were there,
    everywhere.

    It smelled good, cool, green, true.

    No bullshit this time.

    No heavy smell of lies or even the light scent of a tease.
    No it was green and true,
    no bullshit stinking things up.

    I had no idea who I was looking for but there would be only you.
    This I knew,
    this I knew to be true.

    I would know your voice and understand the words,
    the voice and the words that live in my head.

    Though this time pure, not hidden amongst many,
    not hidden from any meaning.
    No need to decipher, no need to pretend.

    This time the words we would feel,
    we would feel real together.

    And we would forgive each other there in the deep green woods
    of truth.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    The ocean came to me last night.
    You ask why....

    I had to wash away.

    It came powerful, ceaseless.

    Loud, too loud, rushing in my ears.
    It drowned the cries of the birds,
    my birds.

    Water filled the streets, taking the sunset.
    Gathering my life and moving it away,
    far and away.

    The sun rose on my new day,
    peaceful, lovely, quiet.

    I see a hummingbird sitting at the feeder,
    so tiny yet so tough.
    And my feeders need to be filled,
    before the Deluge.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    this dream a relic
    as i
    we survive the passage of time

    a black shadow behind curtains
    fear
    lay with me to rest

    reverence the moral
    in a story never told
    to a story i won't hear

    the perfect piece
    yes peace
    to keep it satisfied

    red footprints
    inked
    by spilled blood

    trace their path that never ends
    through this dream that is a relic

    surviving the passage of time
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    In a dream outside a dream
    colors make rainbows
    sounds make music
    tastes make memories
    eyes make love
    embraces make tears
    smiles make mine

    You make a dream come true :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    'I'm not done'

    "Your time has come"

    'But they need me'

    "you will always guide them"

    'But they love me'

    "this love will last"

    'But it's so beautiful there'

    "you can bring the beauty with you"

    'But I just can't ....
    I just can't say goodbye'

    "you will never have to say goodbye"

    'I will never have to say goodbye' ... whispers from a dream
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Two nights,
    two nights I dreamt of you.
    Two nights in a row,
    Why?
    There were no words,
    none.
    Not either night.
    Only your tall thinned body close to mine.
    Close enough to hold, to kiss,
    so real.
    Your large eyes from the past,
    filled with pain.
    More pain than anyone knew.

    Forgive me sweet friend, more pain than I knew.

    Now, it leaves me missing you more than before.

    Perhaps the reason why....

    missing you my just punishment.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Your voice rocked me to sleep last night.

    It played on through my dreams....

    no,

    my dreams played on to your voice.

    The music guided, created, gave encore after encore.

    Notes like steps,

    movement a dance,

    applause my peace.

    This I can do,

    night after night. :D
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Wow, I love this thread. I hope there is more to come.
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    WOW.... I love it too !!!! Better than those romance novels - your poems are filled with lots of love :D
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    Wow, I love this thread. I hope there is more to come.
    :D thanks friend it may be endless :lol:
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    mikalina wrote:
    WOW.... I love it too !!!! Better than those romance novels - your poems are filled with lots of love :D

    thanks for the sweet words, friend :D
    what the world needs more of... love... I borrowed that :lol:
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    Wow, I love this thread. I hope there is more to come.
    :D thanks friend it may be endless :lol:


    :lol:


    There's a lot of dreams left to be had. Certain of that.

    Reminds me of a time in my school English class - we were talking about dreams, aged 14, and this kid stood up and started describing his dream, wide eyed, in front of the class..... he was walking and walking through a dark damp triangular forest, he had a crossbow in his hand. He saw a deer flash across his path - raised up his crossbow - and the whole crossbow just wilted.

    Everyone was listening with their mouths open, and the teacher just said 'Um, OK, thanks for that Jay, I think some people might be able to interpret something in that. You better sit down now.'


    So be careful - we might just analyze you Pandi
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    Wow, I love this thread. I hope there is more to come.
    :D thanks friend it may be endless :lol:


    :lol:


    There's a lot of dreams left to be had. Certain of that.

    Reminds me of a time in my school English class - we were talking about dreams, aged 14, and this kid stood up and started describing his dream, wide eyed, in front of the class..... he was walking and walking through a dark damp triangular forest, he had a crossbow in his hand. He saw a deer flash across his path - raised up his crossbow - and the whole crossbow just wilted.

    Everyone was listening with their mouths open, and the teacher just said 'Um, OK, thanks for that Jay, I think some people might be able to interpret something in that. You better sit down now.'


    So be careful - we might just analyze you Pandi

    how I interpret Jay's dream is love ... of course... right :lol:

    realizing the beauty before his eyes, the magnificence that is life,
    he could not take it, he was unable to kill.
    An empathy message that hopefully stuck through life,
    most especially if it remained as pictures in his head years later.

    I guess perhaps the teacher, as some, was thinking sexual performance
    but I think sexual interpretation to be kind of a cop out
    on the potential for the dream state.

    Someday they may find that our subconscious is providing learning
    material for our conscious,
    that dreams are indeed a lesson, in themselves, as life experience is.

    Analyze away ;)
    that can be the highest complement, that one would even care that much
    and listen long enough

    thank you for listening :D

    and this reminds me of 'What Dreams May Come' a really far out movie 8-)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4FM1XaF6jo

    "Thought is real. Physical is the illusion. Ironic, huh ?"
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I dreamed last night you wanted to change me...

    that Love wasn't strong enough to hold.

    As clear as here, I walked and ran, watching the time tick away.

    I was strong again, moved with flight, leaving the old bones behind.

    Tears they dried, I returned, found you by my side.

    Found our Love by my side...

    strong enough to hold.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    I dreamed last night you wanted to change me...

    that Love wasn't strong enough to hold.

    As clear as here, I walked and ran, watching the time tick away.

    I was strong again, moved with flight, leaving the old bones behind.

    Tears they dried, I returned, found you by my side.

    Found our Love by my side...

    strong enough to hold.



    Powerful and lovely - a rare combination
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    I dreamed last night you wanted to change me...

    that Love wasn't strong enough to hold.

    As clear as here, I walked and ran, watching the time tick away.

    I was strong again, moved with flight, leaving the old bones behind.

    Tears they dried, I returned, found you by my side.

    Found our Love by my side...

    strong enough to hold.



    Powerful and lovely - a rare combination
    :D thanks!
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Bill Callahan ..."show me the way to shake a memory"

    Bill Callahan eid ma clack shaw

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ghP3DD2t6s

    Working through death's pain

    Last night I swear I felt your touch
    Gentle and warm
    The hair stood on my arms
    How, how, how?

    Show me the way, show me the way, show me the way
    To shake a memory

    I flipped my forelock, I twitched my withers, I reared and bucked
    I could not put my rider aground
    All these fine memories are fuckin' me down

    I dreamed it was a dream that you were gone
    I woke up feeling so ripped by reality
    Love is the king of the beasts
    And when it gets hungry it must kill to eat
    Love is the king of the beasts
    A lion walking down city streets

    I fell back asleep some time later on
    And I dreamed the perfect song
    It held all the answers, like hands laid on

    I woke halfway and scribbled it down
    And in the morning what I wrote I read
    It was hard to read at first but here's what it said

    Eid ma clack shaw
    Zupoven del ba
    Mertepy ven seinur
    Cofally ragdah

    Show me the way, show me the way, show me the way
    To shake a memory



    A great interpretation...


    Eid Ma Clack Shaw, as I hear it, is split into two parts. The narrator has two separate but equally important dreams. In the first dream, he has a dream in which his departed lover — by death or other means — visits him. That dream shakes the narrator, in such a profound manner that he is awakened. He wishes that there were a way to rid himself of such painful memories.

    That dream leads into the second part of the song. The narrator falls back asleep and is suddenly inspired to compose the most perfect song. This song, he says, contains all the answers — perhaps how to rid himself of memories. He then somewhat awakens and manages to write down the lyrics to this song that he has written in the dream — but then when he fully awakens, he has scribbled the following:

    Eid ma clack shaw
    Zupoven del ba
    Mertepy ven seinur
    Cofally ragdah

    He ends the song by repeating his desire to be able to rid himself of memories and he reminds us of the song that he wrote in his dream.

    What can we do with knowledge that we learn in dreams?

    Can we ever hope to take the knowledge outside of the dreams?

    Or is it just that there is nothing really new in our dreams since they are created by our own brains and we should be able to find the knowledge if we can but delve into our own mindspace somehow?

    In an interview with Uncut magazine, Mr. Callahan was asked about writing songs in dreams.

    Have you ever “dreamed the perfect song”?

    "I have dreamed melodies that made my heart weep and I have dreamed lyrics that would shatter the world. When I wake they run back into the woods."




    What are your thoughts on the song and capturing dreams?
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    pandora wrote:
    The ocean came to me last night.
    You ask why....

    I had to wash away.

    It came powerful, ceaseless.

    Loud, too loud, rushing in my ears.
    It drowned the cries of the birds,
    my birds.

    Water filled the streets, taking the sunset.
    Gathering my life and moving it away,
    far and away.

    The sun rose on my new day,
    peaceful, lovely, quiet.

    I see a hummingbird sitting at the feeder,
    so tiny yet so tough.
    And my feeders need to be filled,
    before the Deluge.

    this is my absolute favorite of this dream epic

    (and ditto dearest pandora on your "love you guys" post)
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    chickweed wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    The ocean came to me last night.
    You ask why....

    I had to wash away.

    It came powerful, ceaseless.

    Loud, too loud, rushing in my ears.
    It drowned the cries of the birds,
    my birds.

    Water filled the streets, taking the sunset.
    Gathering my life and moving it away,
    far and away.

    The sun rose on my new day,
    peaceful, lovely, quiet.

    I see a hummingbird sitting at the feeder,
    so tiny yet so tough.
    And my feeders need to be filled,
    before the Deluge.

    this is my absolute favorite of this dream epic

    (and ditto dearest pandora on your "love you guys" post)
    :D:D

    this dream left some great pics in it's wake... get it ... double pun there :lol:
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Dreaming Me


    liberate the conscious

    release the subconscious

    free to be all of me



    with one mind

    to embrace the space

    the endless journey

    for whole thought



    a bigger spirit

    a stronger soul

    to be more

    than before

  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    pandora wrote:
    Dreaming Me


    liberate the conscious

    release the subconscious

    free to be all of me



    with one mind

    to embrace the space

    the endless journey

    for whole thought



    a bigger spirit

    a stronger soul

    to be more

    than before



    lovely Pandora.... :D
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    mikalina wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Dreaming Me


    liberate the conscious

    release the subconscious

    free to be all of me



    with one mind

    to embrace the space

    the endless journey

    for whole thought



    a bigger spirit

    a stronger soul

    to be more

    than before



    lovely Pandora.... :D
    thank you mikalina... you always make me smile :D

    I hope your day is as great as you! thheartsmile.gif
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Love awaits tonight,
    in that dream, never elusive as the others.

    Time and again,
    it returns to ease my heavy heart, warm and safe.

    And when I awake, I smile, I laugh.
    The pain of yesterday gone, for now, for today.

    And the hope to dream again, remains.
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