in

acrossssSsssshittt

I said

keep lookin out… out
‘don’t look back … within
‘don’t look … in
I said listen
keep listening

hear me silent
keep it in
the words
I could sing
I keep em in
not quietly
silently

I wanna sing
but I don’t
wanna look in
there’s a light
but on the outside
hear me
I don’t cry
‘don’t see me
I hide
‘feel me?
something died

mikalina

acrosssSssshit wrote:

I said

keep lookin out… out
‘don’t look back … within
‘don’t look … in
I said listen
keep listening

hear me silent
keep it in
the words
I could sing
I keep em in
not quietly
silently

I wanna sing
but I don’t
wanna look in
there’s a light
but on the outside
hear me
I don’t cry
‘don’t see me
I hide
‘feel me?
something died

Very good, Shezhad

I wanna sing,
but I don't,
wanna look in,
there's a light,
but on the outside,
here me, I don't cry
don't see me
I hide,
feel me ?
something died.....

I like that paragraph,
lately I've had some disturbing news that makes me want to hide.... thanks for sharing.

rollings

Those are some words just waiting for the right melody to come along and snatch them up and call each other a song.

Godfather.

Dang Dang wrote:

Those are some words just waiting for the right melody to come along and snatch them up and call each other a song.

totaly agree Dang Dang.

I always said you have the tallent Brother, you just wrote a song.

Godfather.

PilateOfTheStorm

Godfather. wrote:

Dang Dang wrote:

Those are some words just waiting for the right melody to come along and snatch them up and call each other a song.

totaly agree Dang Dang.

I always said you have the tallent Brother, you just wrote a song.

Godfather.

i agree with Dang Dang and Godfather.
this is great

that last verse, woah. really hits you, really intense.