King Me Tumultuous

rollings

And he is the spirit
the poet
the person
capturing words kept
when you should, if you should say them like that

you've built yourself a tower you are

Pardon my
low-lying picking back-up the present
passed around to the past
its the price to pay
for staying going

the bits and pieces

Like a bird,
what is gathered is just passing
theres nothng to hold on to

But never do I not go
Its all just up there as to he is out there

I know that someday, I'll be sitting on that
karma

and if only it were alway just like this

PilateOfTheStorm

love this

a lot

it's great



can't stop reading it over and over

so unusual and unique

"capturing words kept
when you should, if you should say them like that"

brilliant

rollings

PilateOfTheStorm wrote:

love this

a lot

it's great



can't stop reading it over and over

so unusual and unique

"capturing words kept
when you should, if you should say them like that"

brilliant

Thank you so much--You are always so generous with your kind comments.
I'm thinking you might have poems yourself(?)

PilateOfTheStorm

Dang Dang wrote:

PilateOfTheStorm wrote:

love this

a lot

it's great



can't stop reading it over and over

so unusual and unique

"capturing words kept
when you should, if you should say them like that"

brilliant

Thank you so much--You are always so generous with your kind comments.
I'm thinking you might have poems yourself(?)

well i'm only saying how i feel, and there's a lot of talent on this board. a lot of great great writing, yours being a shining example.

i've written one poem, in the let's get creative thread (i think?)
nothing spectacular, i hope to write more in the near future

acrossssSsssshittt

Dang Dang wrote:

Like a bird,
what is gathered is just passing
theres nothng to hold on to

even a bird then could be sad? sometimes it does look that way but it's only come to me now

Godfather.

very cool ! I like it.

Godfather.

tremors

I like 'dang dang''s writing. A LOT.

I am glad that dang dang is back - did I miss a triumphant return?

I too would like to see some more poems from Pilate of the Storm. I hope she writes us some!


Just my thoughts!