How Did I fail
AmbientDiversion
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Some time earlier I wrote this
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How did I fail
to see these wounds
accumulating?
beneath the stern
jacket I lie
toward myself again
Begin to free again
from the loose vision
of I
again
&
How did I fail
to feel these binds
aggregating?
Inside my warm
habit I pry
forward my sense again
begin to learn again
from the long pageant
of I
again
Each day
when I awake
I begin
__________
Nothing more to report from here
_________________________
How did I fail
to see these wounds
accumulating?
beneath the stern
jacket I lie
toward myself again
Begin to free again
from the loose vision
of I
again
&
How did I fail
to feel these binds
aggregating?
Inside my warm
habit I pry
forward my sense again
begin to learn again
from the long pageant
of I
again
Each day
when I awake
I begin
__________
Nothing more to report from here
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That is beautiful
1998: Barrie
2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
2006: Toronto X2
2009: Toronto
2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
2023: Chicago X2
2024: New York X2
It's why we share with each other. For feedback. Accolades. Encouragement etc...
Means a lot you took the time.
Best
AmbientDiversion
You're welcome
1998: Barrie
2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
2006: Toronto X2
2009: Toronto
2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
2023: Chicago X2
2024: New York X2
I feel this...! Thanks, great poem.