motherfucker

acrossssSsssshittt
acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited May 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the night I killed myself
I suffered an ache

I’ve found something new
baby I gotta tell you
this is something new
this is the right time
to go outta my mind
cuz it just don’t matter
not no more
if I still love you

so go get your pretty little things
and go have a pretty little life
cuz I’ve crashed hard into
something new
and baby it ain’t you

….if I’m considered a curse
and if I’m told that I’m a disgrace
to my own fuckin name

well

man I just don’t give a shit
cuz motherfucker this is my name
and this
is me

and baby this is the time
to just forget about me
cuz you don’t get me
loving you
…I ain’t gonna shit on my history
and I sure as dick ain’t gonna throw no shit on eddie
and … and fuck me
if I repeat history
while hearing stevie

so it’s cool
that I’m gonna fly
and hit the ground
just before you leave
you know I ain’t ever again
gonna see you around
cuz baby we’re too cool
...you and me
I love you
this is something new
this is not for you
cuz baby my love for you
it just ain’t for me
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  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    whoa
    motherfucker

    heavy shit
    to get across

    you ARE the shit
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Bro where did that come from ? un-real ! fantastic,you rock Brother !

    Godfather.
  • pepper
    pepper Posts: 155
    WOW!!!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    so cool... thankyouthankyouthankyou
  • Thoughts_Arrive
    Thoughts_Arrive Melbourne, Australia Posts: 15,165
    crazy, now I feel like breaking something! :x
    Adelaide 17/11/2009, Melbourne 20/11/2009, Sydney 22/11/2009, Melbourne (Big Day Out Festival) 24/01/2014
  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    great :clap:
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Thoughts_Arrive wrote:
    crazy, motherfucker now I feel like breaking something! :x

    there
    fixed
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    i once broke into pieces a meaningful fucker... felt good... felt again
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    i once broke into pieces a meaningful fucker... felt good... felt again

    i once reassembled a broken fucker
    didn't take
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    chickweed wrote:
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    i once broke into pieces a meaningful fucker... felt good... felt again

    i once reassembled a broken fucker
    didn't take

    i take it it didn't give either
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    touche
    motherfucker
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    'ts too bad... but sounds like the real motherfucker
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    I just got the chance to read this - I love it !!! lots of good anger going on in this poem.... I've been in a pissed off mood lately .... Thanks for sharing....
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  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mikalina wrote:
    I just got the chance to read this - I love it !!! lots of good anger going on in this poem.... I've been in a pissed off mood lately .... Thanks for sharing....

    the cool thing is that love last longer than anger Mikalina so when we are angry we still have something to look forward to.

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    mikalina wrote:
    I just got the chance to read this - I love it !!! lots of good anger going on in this poem.... I've been in a pissed off mood lately .... Thanks for sharing....

    the cool thing is that love last longer than anger Mikalina so when we are angry we still have something to look forward to.

    Godfather.

    "good anger"... that's so cute mika... thank you.. i didn't think you ever get pissed off but ... a lil bit of getting pissed off keeps us colourful... i believe...

    Godfather's right... love does outlast anger... that could mean more hurt... for better or worse
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    Thank you GF and Shezhad....
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  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    mikalina wrote:
    I just got the chance to read this - I love it !!! lots of good anger going on in this poem.... I've been in a pissed off mood lately .... Thanks for sharing....

    the cool thing is that love last longer than anger Mikalina so when we are angry we still have something to look forward to.

    Godfather.

    that may well be the most profound thing you've written
    good vibe
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    chickweed wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    mikalina wrote:
    I just got the chance to read this - I love it !!! lots of good anger going on in this poem.... I've been in a pissed off mood lately .... Thanks for sharing....

    the cool thing is that love last longer than anger Mikalina so when we are angry we still have something to look forward to.

    Godfather.

    that may well be the most profound thing you've written
    good vibe

    i agree with Chickweed,
    perfect words Godfather :)
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    electric
    is that you??
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"

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