Inside Out

Susanne76
Susanne76 Posts: 49
edited June 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
By Susanne Ankelin · Sunday, 20 March 2011

Inside

Everything clear and bright

Inside

Plenty of warm light



Outside

Another day, another fight

Outside

Blocking the guiding light



Awaken to NO side

Make room for insight
I have wished for so long...
How I wish for you today
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  • zarocat
    zarocat Posts: 1,901
    'Awaken to no side'

    Brilliant line
    1996: Toronto
    1998: Barrie
    2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
    2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
    2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
    2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
    2006: Toronto X2
    2009: Toronto
    2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
    2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
    2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
    2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
    2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
    2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
    2022: Ottawa, Hamilton, Toronto
    2023: Chicago X2
    2024: New York X2
  • Susanne76
    Susanne76 Posts: 49
    zarocat wrote:
    'Awaken to no side'

    Brilliant line


    thank you :)
    I have wished for so long...
    How I wish for you today
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    very nice work and welcome to Poetry, Prose, Music & Art.

    Godfather.
  • Susanne76
    Susanne76 Posts: 49
    thank you Godfather :)
    as I'm German, writing in English is not quite natural to me, but I try my best .. :)
    I have wished for so long...
    How I wish for you today
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Susanne76 wrote:
    thank you Godfather :)
    as I'm German, writing in English is not quite natural to me, but I try my best .. :)

    well you do very good !

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    this is part of a poem I am sending to hot valley writers, your poem reminded if this.


    Sie sagt, dass ich Sie irgendwo irgendwann meine Ganzen Träume zeigen werde, werden wahr werden Und sie glaubt
    es.

    Godfather.
  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    Awaken to NO side

    Make room for insight

    this is great.
    forceful yet delicate, assertive and open minded...
    relates to how i feel, thank you for sharing

    and

    welcome :wave:

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