emotional rescue - hoo hoo hu hoo hoo, hoo hoo hoo!

DopeBeastie
DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited May 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art


What can become of a heart that's unbroken
no longer longing unloosed from its sigh
no longer bending in endlessness ending
but wordless and thankful and mindful, all right

I don't know, I don't know, I don't know, know I
I know, I know, I know, I know now, don't I

might have to still itself against its habit
of finding the bittersweet in everything
a letting, unvengeful, a place for peace, fullness
turning new purposes wild on the fly

Believe, believe, believe, believe, believe, and leave be
Leave be, leave be, leave be, leave be, believe
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  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Very lyrical - sounds like it should be being sung from the rafters
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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    definitely a song i started on a couple of days ago when I was on a long, long drive :)

    You are from England, I see? Whereabouts? I just finished up the Mists of Avalon series, and i really want to go to Glastonbury for the festival...
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Yep - I'm from England - in the middle!

    I don't know mists of Avalon, but anyone who loves music (and festivals) should go to Glastonbury at least once in their lives. You won't be disappointed!
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  • DopeBeastie
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    Like Robin Hood? Nottingham? lol... I just met a brit the other day who was from Nottingham. In To' Naneesdizi, Arizona (Tuba City), of all places.

    The Mists of Avalon is an Arthurian historical fantasy... goddesses and druids and Excalibur and Atlantis and all of that... I loved it.

    I'll get to Glastonbury someday... so many destinations... :)
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Get yourself to Glastonbury!
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  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    great poem/song
    definitely very lyrical and i love the words you chose - and the repetition of believe into leave be, i don't know


    also i would take his advice :
    tremors wrote:
    Get yourself to Glastonbury!

    :)
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    electricxlovex wrote:
    great poem/song
    definitely very lyrical and i love the words you chose - and the repetition of believe into leave be, i don't know


    also i would take his advice :
    tremors wrote:
    Get yourself to Glastonbury!

    :)


    Shouldn't you be in bed youngster? ;)
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  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    tremors wrote:
    electricxlovex wrote:
    great poem/song
    definitely very lyrical and i love the words you chose - and the repetition of believe into leave be, i don't know


    also i would take his advice :
    tremors wrote:
    Get yourself to Glastonbury!

    :)


    Shouldn't you be in bed youngster? ;)


    bed? meh,sleep is for losers :roll: and old people :lol:

    joking, i am in bed. just not in the mood to sleep

    i appreciate the concern though ;)
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    electricxlovex wrote:
    tremors wrote:


    Shouldn't you be in bed youngster? ;)


    bed? meh,sleep is for losers :roll: and old people :lol:

    joking, i am in bed. just not in the mood to sleep

    i appreciate the concern though ;)


    Sorry, only teasing ;) I'm up later than usual listening to records - thought I'd be the only Brit up at this hour!
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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thanks, electrixlovex... it's verse's cadence rolls like Lucy in the Sky with diamonds, i'll have to work that out of my head, and get out a guitar to see what happens in the bridge... add verses, maybe a chorus... lol... WORK!

    now, get ye both to bed... it's only 8 pm here, and we're headed out :)

    ciao ciao

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