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familiar walls

mfc2006mfc2006 Posts: 37,447
edited May 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
these familiar walls
these old withdrawls
they sneak up on his back
they sneak up...

an unwelcome pause
an unwelcome pause
shows him what he lacks
shows him...

it's not a game to me
you aren't the same, i see

it's not a game to me
you aren't to blame, you see

it's not a game to me
you aren't the same, i see

familiar walls don't fall down....

these familiar walls
line the brightened hall
the walls show a path, a path....
I LOVE MUSIC.
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  • LoulouLoulou Posts: 6,247
    Reeeeeally nice Matt, thanks for posting! :)
    “ "Thank you Palestrina. It’s a wonderful evening, it’s great to be here and I wanna dedicate you a super sexy song." " (last words of Mark Sandman of Morphine)


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  • mfc2006mfc2006 Posts: 37,447
    Loulou wrote:
    Reeeeeally nice Matt, thanks for posting! :)

    thanks, Lorna! looking forward to hearing what Chris does with this new song. 8-)
    I LOVE MUSIC.
    www.cluthelee.com
    www.cluthe.com
  • LoulouLoulou Posts: 6,247
    OOoooo, great. Must be cool to polish up your side of things, send it off, then recieve it back and get to listen to Chris's added parts. :D I guess you both have a very similar mind set and opinion hey?
    mfc2006 wrote:
    Loulou wrote:
    Reeeeeally nice Matt, thanks for posting! :)

    thanks, Lorna! looking forward to hearing what Chris does with this new song. 8-)
    “ "Thank you Palestrina. It’s a wonderful evening, it’s great to be here and I wanna dedicate you a super sexy song." " (last words of Mark Sandman of Morphine)


    Adelaide 1998
    Adelaide 2003
    Adelaide 2006 night 1
    Adelaide 2006 night 2
    Adelaide 2009
    Melbourne 2009
    Christchurch NZ 2009
    Eddie Vedder, Adelaide 2011
    PJ20 USA 2011 night 1
    PJ20 USA 2011 night 2
    Adelaide BIG DAY OUT 2014
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    nice. i like it...like it a lot :)
    peace,
    jo

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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mfc2006 wrote:
    these familiar walls
    these old withdrawls
    they sneak up on his back
    they sneak up...

    an unwelcome pause
    an unwelcome pause
    shows him what he lacks
    shows him...

    it's not a game to me
    you aren't the same, i see

    it's not a game to me
    you aren't to blame, you see

    it's not a game to me
    you aren't the same, i see

    familiar walls don't fall down....

    these familiar walls
    line the brightened hall
    the walls show a path, a path....


    wow ! this is great !

    Godfather.
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    very PJ-esque

    i don't know if you noticed that at all...LOVE IT!! more each time i read it :)
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • mfc2006mfc2006 Posts: 37,447
    thanks, everyone. it's one of those songs that i wish that i didn't have to write.
    I LOVE MUSIC.
    www.cluthelee.com
    www.cluthe.com
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    mfc2006 wrote:
    thanks, everyone. it's one of those songs that i wish that i didn't have to write.

    a real life song?

    this is very good
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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